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#1 2021-03-07 20:35:23

RiderMind
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Registered: 2021-03-07
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Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Hi all.
I'm not a great writer but I just feel like writing sometimes.
Also, English is my second language so please have mercy (I will be glad to get any grammar/spelling correction in private!)
Hope you will enjoy.

P. S. I saw that children stories are strictly forbidden. Does highschool stories are also under this prohibition? (without mentioning ages, only highschool setting- I chose for this story a college setting instead just due to this rule)

P. S. S.  If you have any idea for a short story you would like to read you are welcome to write here or in private, as long as it's not a wom (the only kind I don't enjoy... Sorry. All the others i.e. mom/mow/wow are good). If I like the idea I will try to write one!

The story:

"Hey, do you come to get some oranges?" Eric asked.
We both learn in the same class in college. We met on the first day and became friends fast.
"Sure, why not", I replied. There is a nice orchard close to our class. We would grab there some oranges from time to time. It was nearing the end of the season but there should still be some oranges left.
When we got to the orchard I saw that indeed there were some oranges left, but only at the very top of the trees. The rest were probably taken already, or just fell.
"This might be hard" I  murmured. I grabbed the nearest branch and pulls it down, trying to get the oranges within range. Eric tried to grab the oranges from the pulled branch, but it still wasn't low enough.
We stood for some seconds, looking at the oranges out of reach.
"Hey, I have an idea" Eric said. "maybe you can lift me on your shoulders? Then I will be able to grab some."
The last time I got a shoulder ride was some years ago, at highschool. Still, the very mention of a ride immediately sent a thrill trhoug my body.
However, I wanted to be carried! I always despised the idea of carrying someone. No, the one on top definitely should be me.
However, I was a bit taller and more mascular than Eric.
"It is a good idea" I said. "however..." I searched fast for something. "my back hurts a bit from the training at the gym yesterday. Maybe you can lift me instead?"
You could see it caugth Eric unprepared.
"I don't know..." he said. "you are heavier than me...and probably stronger..."
I could feel that Eric didn't really wanted to carry me. Maybe he also like to be carried? However, it was too good a chance.
"Come on!" I pushed on while he was still hesitant. "I'm sure you can handle my weight, I'm not that heavier than you". Which was true.
Without giving him time to reconsider I caught his shoulders and turned him around. "let's try at least,  we made all the way here so we have to grab some oranges at least". With that said I caught a branch above me with both hands, and using the leverage I jumped high and managed to put my legs above his shoulder. Then I took hold on another, higher branch, and through pulling and using the shoulders beneath my legs for balance I got into a sitting position, with my thighs around his nech, my legs crossed behind his back and my groin firmly pressed against the back of his neck. Then I gradually left the branch until my full weight was on him.
"Uh, oh" he said, probably surprised from the fast turn of events,  leaving the unexpected rider on his shoulders.
"Are you good down there?" I asked, trying to mask the excitement in my voice.
"You are heavy!" he complained. "I don't know how long I can hold you..." but he took holds of my legs with his hands.
I plucked two oranges and passed them down. However I was far from satisfied yet. So I chose to pluck some not very good looking oranges.
"The oranges here are not great..." I said, with obvious disappointment in my voice. "Hey, I think I see good oranges on the tree there" I points in the direction of the road into the orchard.
Eric started walking obediently.
"Are we not yet there? He said after some walking.
"No they are also not the best... Keep going" I said, enjoying his body beneath me.
"This is good" I said eventually and plucked some good oranges.
"Great, can you finally get down?" he gasped a bit.
It was raining yesterday, so the road inside the orchard was still muddy.
"Well, I prefer not to get in the mud...since you already carrying me why won't you carry me back? Come on" I said and clasped my thighs stronger around his neck.
I got off after he carried me back. Alas, I think I anjoyed this trip much more than my friend.
Well...
He will have to get used to my weight because I am definitely going to find the opportunity to hop back on his shoulders, whether he will want it or not.

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#2 2021-03-08 12:40:53

esel
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Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Good story , THKS ... And as you are STRONGER than he is, you will easily "convince " him again and again to be your horse smile

Esel

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#3 2021-03-09 11:20:45

RiderMind
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Last visit: 2022-06-22
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Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Thank you! This was exactly my line of thinking 😏 I see you also have a good mind haha

Too bad it's a fiction I wish I had a real obediante pony to force to my will lol

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#4 2021-03-12 07:35:49

Ajax
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Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Nice story man! I’d also love to team up with a carrier and do something like this! smile

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#5 2021-03-12 08:21:17

RiderMind
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Posts: 10

Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Ajax wrote:

Nice story man! I’d also love to team up with a carrier and do something like this! smile

Thanks! I hope you will find your pony someday smile

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#6 2021-03-12 09:08:56

Ajax
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Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

RiderMind wrote:

Ajax wrote:

Nice story man! I’d also love to team up with a carrier and do something like this! smile

Thanks! I hope you will find your pony someday smile

Thanks, same to you! smile I was lucky to meet a few before lockdown.

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#7 2021-03-12 11:52:21

RiderMind
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Male (30), Israel
Registered: 2021-03-07
Last visit: 2022-06-22
Posts: 10

Re: Riding in the orchard- fiction story

Ajax wrote:

RiderMind wrote:

Ajax wrote:

Nice story man! I’d also love to team up with a carrier and do something like this! smile

Thanks! I hope you will find your pony someday smile

Thanks, same to you! smile I was lucky to meet a few before lockdown.

You are really lucky! I hope I will find some too

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