Ultimate shoulder rides

That's a very interesting place you're describing to us! Thanks a lot for this!

It must really be a nice feeling to sit on such a riding slave and let yourself be carried, or better: to actively ride him! Then it's not a problem to take a closer look at the island, even the sometimes difficult landscape, i.e. up and down mountains, is easy to master. With a good whip and spurs you can get the ponyboy to walk, trot and even gallop!

That's definitely fun for the ladies, you want to be able to transform into a woman, travel to the island and ride one of those Ponyboys, a really strong, resilient stallion, and make him sweat in the terrain! Maybe I could just disguise myself as a woman to ride such a slave? That would be a good thing!

But what would happen to me when the ladies in this paradise realize that a man in women's clothing has crept in and is riding their pony slaves, having fun with them? I would be sure of the meanest tortures! I think it's better not to take that risk, it's probably too dangerous!

The riding ladies have it good ... I envy them for it!

But I'm also sure that the pony boys, the riding slaves, the stallions aren't all unhappy, even if they're often touched hard! Many will also be happy and will not want to leave this place for anything!

Thank you again!
Max

I have a "fertile imagination", and in many cases it almost always ends up in the topic of riding. This can be both the active and the passive part. But to be honest: I don't really want to be a riding slave in your stories, your ponyboys don't exactly have fun!

Your protagonists are undoubtedly very attractive women, as you describe, but the two-legged horses don't have much fun in their existence! No no, I'd rather be a riding slave in my stories, maybe an attractive female rider on a stallion. Maybe even a strict male rider on a strong slave bull!

So everyone has their fantasy, their favourite role in a written story!

I would like to thank you for your contributions, I have read all of them!
Max

**Last warning for all of you** ⚠️

First of all, I write inspired by real stories like the ones from Santorini island Greece where donkeys or mules do not get any comfort or fun. This story is based on that.

Secondly, I have only asked everyone for appreciation I have not asked anyone to criticize my creations. Please understand this and stop making an issue out of it. I don't usually write stories, but I have received over 20 emails, so I started writing. I write stories for myself, and if I am sharing my story with you all, then please respect it, okay?
If anyone misbehaves with my story or makes unnecessary comments in the future, then I will delete my entire story and leave the ultimate group forever. I will never return again, so please keep this in mind. I do not have any desire to share my story with you all, but if I am doing so, then please respect it.

What kind of event are you doing here!

Do what you think is right ... and then it's OK!
Max

Actually, one should not quote oneself, but in this case I will do it once:


"So everyone has their fantasy, their favourite role in a written story!

I would like to thank you for your contributions, I have read all of them!"


If that's not an appreciation of the work ... that's all I can do!
Max

Dude luckyone840

It is right that the stories he wrote are too good to read but we don't need to request him to upload more parts of it as he is not the guy you should request to post. There isn't anything wrong said about his stories. The two guys just expressed their opinions on the characters and story which is clearly not a dislike of his story but he showed wrong attitude to all of us as you can see he used the words 'warning' and 'punishments' for all the members. We are not his prisoners that he talk to everyone like this or just writing long good stories doesn't makes him the boss here.

Dude well trained pony boy

I don't know however you take my message but you are no one to force people to appreciate your stories. If you want appreciation then you must have to go through the opinions of everyone and accept it what they didn't like in your stories instead of talking to them like this. If you are fulfilling their wishes that doesn't mean you can behave the way you want and lastly, if you want to leave this forum you are free to do so as you are not gonna post any more stories so I don't think there is any more reason for you to stay here.

Last edited by Carrier boy (2023-07-16 20:30:25)

The fact is that this guy 'well trained pony boy' is nothing but a short tempered man who thinks that everyone is against him but I am not like him so I am not gonna take his words on me and I am not gonna go toxic.
Secondly, I myself was one of his readers and I liked his stories too but his attitude towards the response of his story felt wrong to me as I am also a story writer myself and I also get many opinions to improve my writing but I never take them in a negative way.
And lastly, I never forced him to leave this site, everything I said was totally based on facts as everyone know that he himself said that he is not gonna post any more stories for some reason.

The other members of this community: could you please be kinder when you write messages here? as it is already easy to misconstrue on internet when you are not interacting face to face, so be kinder is always a better option if you really want to have meaningful communication, and Well trained pony boy, trust me, the others who you think "criticize you" they also like your stories as they said themselves, please use your focus on the riding instead of this meaningless drama, we NEED you, we LOVE you, we WANT you

@Max
I read the stories you wrote with caballito and I liked all of them. I think you are a good candidate to continue this story as we can not leave this story incomplete. I request you to think about my point as if you take the story in your hands the conflict here will be ended.

luckyone840 wrote:

Carrier boy wrote:

@Max
I read the stories you wrote with caballito and I liked all of them. I think you are a good candidate to continue this story as we can not leave this story incomplete. I request you to think about my point as if you take the story in your hands the conflict here will be ended.

Shut up, if you want you can start your story line but don't give out orders!

Guy, firstly no one is talking to you so you don't have any reason to burst on me like this.
Secondly, I didn't give order to anyone I am just requesting a good story writer to take the story in his hands if it's possible for him, rather than leaving it incomplete and go in vain. If you want you can read the message again.

God, I have received 50+ emails and here Luckyone's comments have touched my emotional chord. I consider myself very blessed that some people love me and appreciate my hard work so much. I have decided that I will stay and continue this story and I will bring many new stories to you all as well.

It's done, no more words are necessary, I think we should close the topic now too!
Max