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#51 2025-07-25 01:39:54

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Re: The bride

The Camp (11)

When his turn came, Iván stepped forward with a firm step, although his face showed a certain shyness. The moonlight filtered through the branches of the trees in the courtyard, casting everyone present in white. He looked around, saw other goddaughters on the shoulders of their godfathers, and godmothers proudly leading their godchildren crouched beneath the bridesmaids. Then he spoke:
"Mireya, my godmother, is my best friend's mother," he said in a clear voice. "And about five years ago, at the confirmation ceremony, while the godfathers were ridden by their goddaughters, I was ridden by my godmother."

A curious murmur ran through the group. Luciana smiled, not surprised, but fascinated by the naturalness with which Iván expressed it.

Mireya, a woman of elegant demeanor, her hair tied back in a soft bun, and eyes shining with emotion, approached and placed a hand on the young man's shoulder.
"It was his idea," she added. "Godfathers are their goddaughters' horses. I want to be your horse," he told me. And I didn't have the heart to refuse.

Luciana, with her tone somewhere between a guide and a poet, spoke:
"This is a beautiful example of reciprocity and affection. It's not age that determines the role, but rather the willingness to serve with love. Iván not only honored his godmother, he also broke a pattern, showing that carrying is also a gesture of love."

The ladies nodded, moved. Some men, especially the younger ones, felt inspired. In that moment, protocols and the most rigid customs didn't matter: what prevailed was the bond, the shared play, and the lesson learned.

Luciana concluded:
"Here, everyone can carry and be carried." Because in this space, affection weighs less than the body, and willpower lightens any burden.

Mireya bridled, saddled, and rode elegantly on Iván's shoulders while the group applauded. He, upright and smiling, advanced with a determined stride, making it clear that this gesture was not servitude, but gratitude.

As Iván walked, being carried on the shoulders of his godmother, the scene touched hearts. Upon reaching the center, he stopped naturally and dismounted slowly. Mireya stroked Iván's hair, adjusted her riding habit, and spoke with the serenity that only wise women possess:
"Iván is my best friend's son," she said, looking at the group. "Our children are close in age, and I carried Iván in my arms when he was a baby. Now he's carried me ever since he could."

Her voice moved many, and her tender gaze rested on Iván, who lowered his head for a moment, not out of embarrassment, but out of respect.

Luciana smiled and commented:
"What a beautiful cycle: whoever carries out of love is then carried out of gratitude." Mireya cradled him in her arms, and Iván honored her with his back. This is the kind of reciprocity we want to see flourish.

The scene provoked soft applause, more of deep appreciation than celebration. The younger ones took note in silence. The older women, moved, remembered those they had once cared for. The men, especially those closest to their own godmothers, felt they could also offer that gesture.

Luciana concluded sweetly:
"When affection is passed down from generation to generation, the game becomes a ritual. And in this ritual, carrying is also giving thanks."
Mireya, without needing another word, kissed Iván's forehead. No one would forget that gesture.

Luciana, moved, took a step to the center of the circle and said:
"Every bond has a way of holding on. Sometimes we walk together, other times we carry, and many times... we simply let ourselves be carried, knowing we are in safe hands."

Soon, other women were also carried on shoulders: some by their husbands, others by brothers, godchildren, or even by young devotees who admired them and sought to pay homage. Each couple, as they advanced, displayed their own dynamic: some walked in silence, others between laughter and words of comfort.

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#52 2025-07-25 16:07:07

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Re: The bride

The Camp (12)

One of the older women present, curious and smiling, asked Luciana:
"And you, my dear? How many godparents do you have?"

Luciana, dressed in her usual elegance and surrounded by a luminous aura, raised her chin slightly, gave a wide, charming smile, and replied in a soft but firm voice:
"There are three... so far," she said, leaving a brief, mysterious silence. "Only the wedding godparent is missing."

Her eyes lit up as if she remembered every face, every step they shared. The way she said it generated an immediate reaction. Several women giggled knowingly as they straightened their posture, and the men—aware of their role as "human horse"—lowered their heads, knowing that this fourth godparent would be worthy of her.

Luciana continued, her hand on her chest:
"My godfather at my christening was one of my first horses; I was still very little." The horse at my confirmation was the one who first took me to the altar, and the horse at my first communion taught me to ride firmly, being my horse. Each one was part of a different stage… each one has carried me, with love.

And lowering her voice slightly, she added:
"But the wedding one... that one has yet to be written."

The emotion was palpable. Even the most skeptical felt swept away by that declaration. It was evident: it wasn't just about religious rituals, but about a living commitment, a shared journey, a deep bond between the one who leads... and the one who leads.

An elderly woman murmured, as if to herself:
"That girl... was born to be carried by her horses."

Luciana, listening as she passed, smiled again. And she held her head high, because she knows that, when the time comes, her most noble horse will appear.

Luciana's three godparents were introduced, one by one, each with their own significant scene. This moment marks Luciana's passage through the different stages of her growth, and how each godfather has accompanied her—literally—carrying her on their shoulders or backs, as a symbol of affection, guidance, and devotion:

Don Ramiro, Godfather at Baptism, was the first to advance when Luciana finished speaking. A robust man with a graying beard and tender gaze approached. Luciana looked at him with childlike affection and said:
"This is my godfather at baptism, Don Ramiro. The first of my godfathers I ride."

Don Ramiro respectfully removed his hat, bowed slightly, and then gently said:
"When we baptized her, she was sleeping in my arms. And as we left the church, I refused to pass her on to anyone. I carried her myself to her mother's house. It was the first of many journeys; first in my arms, then on my back, and finally, on my shoulders."

Luciana approached, he knelt slowly, and she, as if she were three years old again, climbed onto Don Ramiro's back with the ease of memory. He sat up, firm, Luciana sitting firmly on top of him, riding him; Don Ramiro's body still knows how to be ridden by her. She placed her hands on his thighs, which were on the shoulders of the man who protected her like a daughter, and still does.

Spontaneous applause erupted from the audience.

Don Ernesto—First Communion Godfather—was next, thinner and more elegant, with glasses and a distinguished gait. Luciana pointed to him:
"My First Communion godfather. He taught me to ride like a jockey... and to trust."

Don Ernesto smiled and said:
"Luciana was afraid to ride alone in the procession. So I had her ride on my shoulders, her white dress blowing in the wind, and I walked while she rode among everyone." She didn't touch the ground until she reached the altar.

Luciana, remembering the gesture, walked toward him. He bent down. She sat on Don Ernesto's shoulders, riding him, and when he stood up, everyone could see the image of the young lady above, supported by the nobility of the godfather who helped her take her first steps of faith.
"He never let me feel small," Luciana said from above. "He always lifted me up."

Don Mauricio – Confirmation Godfather, appeared last. Younger than the previous ones, athletic in build, with a frank smile and warm energy. Luciana exclaimed with emotion:
"He's the one from my Confirmation. With him, I learned that one can also ride with joy."

Don Mauricio bowed and said:
"Luciana was already a young lady, and at her Confirmation she wanted something different. She told me: 'I don't want to enter walking, I want to enter riding someone who loves me." I squatted down, and she, as if she'd always done it, climbed onto my back, then rode on my shoulders.

Luciana did it again. He squatted down, she settled on his back, and then he walked through the middle of the room as if they were at a ceremony again.

Upon reaching the front, Luciana stepped down and hugged her three godparents.
"They have carried me. They have guided me. They have loved me unconditionally. I have ridden them," she said, her voice filled with emotion. "You are missing." She looked at the audience, her gaze open and free. "The one who will lead me to the altar. But not just that day. Every day of our lives."

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#53 2025-07-25 22:24:32

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Re: The bride

The Camp (13)

Ask Luciana: "Are you or would you be the godmother of someone whose father is your horse?"

Luciana didn't hesitate. With her head held high and her voice calm, she replied:
"Yes. I am, and I will be more times than I can."

Then, with that mixture of tenderness and firmness that characterizes her, she added:
"Because riding isn't subduing, it's caring. And being ridden isn't surrendering, it's trusting. If a father honors my horse, his son or daughter can trust me to care for them with the same honor."

She paused briefly and concluded:
"Being a godmother is guiding, accompanying, protecting... and also setting an example. If that father honors me with his service as my horse, I will honor his son with my presence."

A question: "Your presence, riding him?"

Luciana met the questioner's gaze. There was no provocation in her eyes, only clarity and conviction. She replied calmly:
"Yes, if that is the way he wishes to honor me. And if he does it with dignity, then I will also ride him with dignity."

Then she added, with gentle firmness:
"Because what is important is not the manner, but the respect, the voluntary dedication, and the truth that lies within the bond. If he offers himself, I accept, and if his son or daughter sees this with understanding, they will know that honor does not humiliate, but exalts."

The silence that followed was not one of judgment, but of astonishment.

They continued asking Luciana: "What you do with your godparents, will you do with your godchildren?"

Luciana smiled with that mixture of sweetness and firmness that characterized her. Her eyes scanned everyone present before answering. In a clear voice, she said:
"My godparents took care of me when I was little. Now they are my horses, because they trust me."

She remained silent for a brief moment, letting the words sink in, and then added calmly:
"My godchildren are and will also be cared for by me. I will not ride them... at least not until they ask. But if they do, I will ride them and lead them with the same firmness with which I guided them when they followed me when they were little."

Some exchanged glances, surprised by her honesty and the depth of her answer. Luciana continued:
"Trust is like a rein: it is taken with respect and offered freely. Whoever gives it to me will be guided."

Another question: "Since when will your godchildren ask you and will you comply?"

Luciana maintained her composure, upright and serene. Her gaze calmly scanned those around her. Then, in a soft but firm voice, she answered:
"As long as they have a conscience and a will. As long as they can understand what it means to fully trust someone."

She took a few steps closer to the center of the room and added:
"It won't be because I impose it, but because they choose it. When that moment comes, if they ask me with an open heart, I will accept them... like a rider accepting his horse: with respect, responsibility, and commitment."

Other questions: "Since when do we have conscience and willpower?" "Since when can we understand what it means to fully trust someone?"

Luciana didn't answer immediately. She walked slowly, as if pondering the questions, and then, in a clear and measured voice, she said:
"Conscience and willpower don't have a specific age. They are born when the heart opens to the truth and the eyes can look beyond oneself. Sometimes it happens in childhood, other times in youth, sometimes never."

She stopped, looking at everyone with tenderness and firmness.
—"Understanding what it means to fully trust someone… that's something you learn by being listened to, by being held when you fall, by knowing that you can give yourself without fear. It's not about years lived, but about experiences felt."

Then she smiled slightly.
—"And when my godchildren reach that point… I'll be there."

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#54 2025-07-25 22:46:51

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Re: The bride

The Camp (14)

More questions: "In childhood?" "In youth?" "Will you be there to...?"

Luciana held the gaze of those who questioned her. Her face showed no doubt, but a mixture of serenity and conviction. She answered slowly, so that each word would sink in:
—"Yes, in childhood... if there is already awareness and commitment."
—"Yes, in youth... if the will and trust are mature."

She paused, then continued gently, but firmly:
—"And yes... I will be there to welcome them, protect them, guide them... and if they ask me with an open heart, also to ride them."

She smiled again, but it wasn't a light smile. It was solemn. It was a promise.

Another question: "In childhood, to ride them?"

Luciana held the question in the air, without rushing to answer. Then, in a calm and clear voice, she said:
—"No. In childhood, only to care for them, guide them, and teach them to be strong, noble, and free."

His tone became firmer:
"Ride them... only when they are conscious, free, and ask me to do so with full will. Not before."

He paused, lowered his gaze for a moment, and concluded respectfully:
"Children are to be loved and protected. Only when childhood is left behind and surrender is born of judgment, then one responds with honor."

There were those who affirmed: "Childhood is left behind in adolescence, and even in preadolescence." "Does honor mean: accepting?"

Luciana looked at them seriously and answered clearly, without hesitation:
"Honor is not accepting everything; it is knowing when to say yes and when to say no to a request to ride or be ridden."

She paused briefly, then continued in a calm but firm voice:
"Childhood can be left behind in adolescence, yes... but full awareness and true judgment do not come only with age, but with maturity of heart and thought."

Her eyes scanned those present, and she added:
"Accepting is not enough. It is necessary to understand, to desire with free will, and to offer oneself with respect, without confusion or pressure. Only then is there honor." Only then is there truth."

Then she smiled sweetly and concluded:
"And if one day one of my godchildren, already mature, asks to be ridden by me… I will know how to listen to their soul, not just their words."

The interrogation continued: "Since when are we mature?" "Words can lie; eyes or a gaze cannot."

Luciana nodded slowly, reflecting. Then, her gaze fixed on the speaker, she replied:
"Maturity has no exact date. It doesn't come with age, it comes with the decisions we make… and with the cost of those decisions."

She paused briefly and added:
"Words can embellish or lie. But the eyes… the eyes don't know how to pretend. You can see the soul in the gaze: if there is sincere desire, if there is doubt, if there is fear, or if there is dedication to being my horse."

Then, gently, but firmly, she said:
"That's why, before accepting, I always look into her eyes. And if her gaze speaks truth to me, I respond with my own."

There was a reverent silence. No one smiled, no one argued. It was impossible not to notice the conviction with which she spoke, and how deeply she understood the connection between guidance and guidance, between power and care.

The room fell silent. No one dared to reply. Because, deep down, everyone knew that, with Luciana, things were always clear... and fair.

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#55 2025-07-25 23:00:26

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Re: The bride

The Camp (15)

Luciana, moved by so many scenes of mutual devotion, smiled tenderly. Her voice, firm but warm, rose above the murmur of the room as she contemplated goddaughters riding to godfathers; girlfriends to boyfriends; wives to husbands; godmothers to godsons; godmothers to godfathers; godmothers to godfathers; godmothers to godfathers; godmothers to godfathers; etc., and said:
"You are the best example of devotion, of trust... and of many other values. There is no shame here, there is love. There is no superiority, there is mutual service. There is no weakness, there is shared strength."

Her words resonated in hearts, as an affirmation that in these bonds—when lived authentically—something profoundly human and sacred is revealed.

A newlywed said: "My godfather rides me more often than my husband."
There was quiet laughter, knowing glances, and a few raised eyebrows among those present. But the newlywed, without blushing, added with conviction and sweetness:
"My husband carries me with the love of a couple... but my godfather carries me with the affection of someone who watched me grow up, someone who promised to care for me like a daughter. Every time he carries me, he reminds me that that promise lives on."

Luciana nodded, moved by those words, and replied:
"Whoever carries you with love honors what you are to them. Your husband, as a husband. Your godfather, as a guide and protector. Each one, from their own place, supports you, and that... that is beautiful."
The atmosphere was filled with a mixture of tenderness, respect, and admiration.

An older woman complained: "My husband hardly ever carries me, but he carries other younger women."

Silence fell over the room for a few seconds. Some glances were directed at the aforementioned husband, others lowered their gaze out of modesty or discomfort.

It was then that Luciana, with serenity and empathy, responded:
"Every act of carrying someone has a meaning. When you carry another, is it out of tenderness, play, habit, or a lack of awareness of what it entails? Sometimes men don't understand what a lady expects... and other times, they understand it all too well."

Then she approached the older woman affectionately, took her hand, and added:
"But it's also true that not every burden is physical. Sometimes a word, a look, a simple gesture... also carries us. Perhaps it's time to remind your husband what that means to you."

Another older woman commented:
"We too deserve to be carried. Not out of pity, but out of the love that never grows old."

And several heads nodded. Among them, some young women who, for the first time, looked at their elders in a different light: that of dignity, tenderness, and the right to continue being supported.

Luciana whispered to her wife, who demanded, "What are your names?" Luciana looked directly at the aforementioned husband, who immediately lowered his gaze. She said, "Don't look so much at my boots, they might be all over you." The man continued staring. Luciana said to the woman, "Give me your address. I'll come Tuesday morning."

The woman, somewhat surprised but also moved by Luciana's firm and protective attitude, nodded silently. With a trembling voice, she wrote her address on a piece of paper and handed it to him.

Luciana took it delicately, folded it carefully, and put it in the inside pocket of her jacket.
Then she turned to her husband, who was still staring at her boots, caught between embarrassment and a silent attraction he didn't know how to control. Luciana approached a few steps, imposing but serene, and said in a low but firm voice:
"When a man ignores the woman he promised to take care of, other eyes notice... and other decisions are made."

The silence that followed wasn't awkward: it was forceful.

Before leaving, Luciana took her wife's hand and said with a gentle but determined smile:
"On Tuesday, I won't just go. You will be taken. And on that day, you will see what it means to be remembered, acknowledged... and lifted up."
And so, she walked away. Her boots echoed on the floor, and each step marked a commitment: to dignity, to memory... and to those who should never have been forgotten.

The man continued to stare, this time at the retreating boots, but no longer with the same expression. His eyes, once filled with silent daring, now showed something more complex: remorse, fascination... and a pang of helplessness.

Luciana's boots walked away, marking each step with a firm, almost solemn sound that etched itself in the consciousness of everyone present. They weren't just heels walking away. They were symbols of authority, justice, presence. Every echo they left on the ground seemed to say: "It could have been with you... but you weren't up to it."

The man didn't say a word. He just slowly lowered his head, like someone who has realized too late the true value of what he had at his side. Meanwhile, his wife, still holding the warmth of Luciana's hand in hers, watched him. And for the first time in a long time, she didn't feel invisible.

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#56 2025-07-25 23:33:57

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The Camp (16) – The Boot Prints (1)

The man saw Luciana's boot prints and stealthily knelt and crouched, as if moved by an impulse he didn't fully understand, and approached them.

The footprints were fresh on the dust of the trail. They were firm, sure, perfectly marked. Each one seemed to contain part of Luciana's character: determination, elegance, power.

The man, with a trembling finger, touched the edge of one of those footprints, as if by doing so he could understand what he was missing... or perhaps, recover something lost.

His wife, from a distance, watched him. She said nothing. She made no move to come closer. She just looked at him, with a mixture of resignation, sadness, and... a silent hope.

Luciana didn't turn around. She didn't need to. She knew she had left something more than physical marks when she left. She was leaving a lesson. She was leaving a promise. And on Tuesday, she would return.

The man kissed the footprint.
At first, he did so cautiously, barely touching the dust with his lips, but then, overcome by an emotion he couldn't name, he repeated it with more devotion. It was an intimate, silent, almost ritual gesture. As if by kissing that mark, he could connect with the presence that had left it... as he might ask for forgiveness or seek guidance.

As he sat up, his eyes shone. Not with tears, but with an understanding that overwhelmed him.

It wasn't just admiration: it was a recognition. Of the force. Of the will. Of the truth that Luciana represented.

He prostrated himself again and followed all of Luciana's footprints he could find. With a mixture of longing and reverence, he repeatedly kissed each one Luciana had left.
Each footprint was distinct: some firmly planted, others barely imprinted on the earth, but all spoke of a sure, determined, dominant stride. Luciana's boots didn't walk: they commanded the ground.

The man, bent over, caressed each mark with his eyes, and when he found one that hadn't yet been erased by the wind or traffic, he knelt and kissed it.

He did it without anyone seeing him, or so he thought, with the respect of someone who knows they've been placed before something greater than themselves.

Thus, without realizing it, he walked almost the entire square.
When there were no more footprints left, he stopped.
He looked ahead.
Luciana wasn't there.
But in his mind, she stood as clear as if she were still there: standing tall, with her hands on her hips, high boots, a firm gaze... and a smile that was impossible to forget.

He remained on his knees, his wife approached behind him, she crouched gently beside her husband, without saying a word at first. The man, still on his knees, his head bowed to the ground and his lips on Luciana's last footprint, didn't dare move. He felt his wife's caresses on his hair like a balm, like a silent truce.

"You know?" she said softly, without rancor, almost tenderly. "I looked at her too."
The man looked up slightly, surprised by her tone.
"Yes, I saw her," his wife continued. "And I understood what she provokes. It's not just her presence. It's what she awakens in others. I don't judge you. I just... I ask you not to forget me."

He wanted to speak, but couldn't. He took her hand. She looked at him sweetly.
"I saw you kiss her footprints. And it didn't hurt."

"No?" he asked, his voice raspy.

"No. Because she... she doesn't take away love, she reveals it. You knelt before her footprint, but I'm here, stroking your hair. Because I love you. Because you're still mine."

He closed his eyes. For a moment there was only silence, and the light touch of her fingers against his gray hair. Then he slowly leaned toward her, his body yielding completely, resting his head on her lap.

Then Luciana appeared before them, her feet in their last footprints.

The gentleman approached on all fours, trembling, his hands searching for the exact outline of Luciana's boots. When he reached them, he touched them devotedly, as if they were a locket, and kissed them repeatedly.

Looking up, he saw her standing, imposing. The morning sun bathed Luciana's figure. She was wearing her fitted white blouse, tight jeans that emphasized her figure, and those high-heeled brown boots that echoed authoritatively on the damp earth. Her gaze was profound, her posture unwavering.

Luciana didn't say a word at first. He looked at the man, kneeling, face to the ground, kissing her boots, then at the man's wife, sitting beside him, her hand on her husband's shoulder. The scene didn't seem to disturb her; rather, she accepted it with an air of resigned reverence.

Luciana spoke, in that voice of hers that seemed to caress and subdue at the same time:
"You said you're hardly ever ridden by her. But look where you are... and who's with you."

The man could barely stammer:
"Sorry... I..."

"Shhh," Luciana interrupted. "Sometimes there are no words, only actions."

Luciana took a step. Her boot landed right in front of the man's face, on one of her previous footprints. With the toe of her boot, Luciana gently lifted the man's chin.
"Are you hers?" she asked, referring to his wife.

"Yes," he replied weakly.

Luciana looked at his wife.
"And you want him with you... even though he's followed me, kissed my footprints, and is kissing my boots?"

The woman nodded serenely.
"He's mine. Still on his knees."

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#57 2025-07-26 00:33:41

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Re: The bride

The Camp (17) – The Boot Prints (2)

Luciana smiled faintly, and with the same firmness with which she had arrived, she took a step back.
"Then take him. But remember this," she said, slowly turning on her heels, "I am not the one who divides... I only reveal."

And without further ado, Luciana walked away, leaving new footprints in the earth. The man did not move.

His wife spoke to him sweetly:
"You know what you must do."

He crawled to the first fresh footprint and kissed it, then kissed the footprints that followed, doing so devotedly and repeatedly.

Luciana appeared again and, with a half-smile full of certainty, stopped right in front of the man, who still had dirt on his face and dirty knees. Her high-heeled brown boots firmly marked her presence as he instinctively lowered his head.
"I warned you," she said, in that soft but uncompromising voice of hers: "Don't look at my boots too much, because they'll end up on top of you."

The gentleman didn't respond. He just shuddered. His wife, still at his side, looked at him with a mixture of tenderness and understanding. Luciana took another step until her boot was on top of him.

"And you did," she added, pressing down with her foot. "You gave yourself over to them. Do you understand now?"

The gentleman slowly raised his gaze. Not with defiance, but with the calm of one who has accepted their fate.
"Yes, Miss Luciana. I understand."

Luciana withdrew her boot and looked at his wife.
"You did it for love. But also for me. Do you accept it that way?"

The woman nodded without hesitation.
"I accept it that way. And I thank you for showing me."

The gentleman whispered, "Thank you... for putting me in my place."

The wife watched her in silence for a few seconds, while her husband remained kneeling, reverent, his gaze fixed on the ground where Luciana's footprints had been left.
"You walk firmly... and you leave a mark. But it's not by stepping. It's by showing how high you can walk."

Luciana nodded slowly, contemplating the woman's gesture, and then said:
"And when I do it... they don't break. They stay where they belong. Because they know that in the end, there is no clearer place than my steps."
Then she looked at the man again.
"And you... you don't need any more warnings, do you?"

He shook his head. Nothing else needed to be said.

Then he looked at his wife.
"Take me," he asked.
She stood up and helped him up. For the first time in a long time, they walked hand in hand, he a little slower, more humble... but complete.

The moon illuminated the camp clearing, bathing the faces of those present in its silvery light. The rustling of the leaves and the crackling of the fire added to the strangely intimate atmosphere. Luciana held the folded paper her husband had just handed her between her fingers, and her voice sounded soft but haunting:
"You two were disconnected for several seconds... as if you were sleeping while awake.
"Did you dream something?"

The husband and wife looked at each other, perplexed, as if barely awakening from a trance. Luciana tilted her head with a smile that seemed to know all the answers, even before the questions were asked.
"Did you dream?" she repeated, this time with ambiguous sweetness, her boots crunching lightly on the ground as she turned on her heels.

The husband swallowed. The wife took his hand without taking her gaze from Luciana. They both felt that, although they were still there, a part of them had been left wandering among the footprints, the whispers, and the authority walking in high heels under the moon.

The priest, his cassock gently fluttering in the night breeze, approached with a serene but curious gesture. He observed the confused faces of the couple, still holding hands, as if they had returned from a distant place.

"Are you all right?" he asked in a pastoral tone, looking especially at the husband, who had dust on his knees, hands, and face.

Luciana, still holding the paper with the address, answered without turning around completely, with that mixture of sweetness and mastery that made even the silence listen:

"It seems they were daydreaming."

The priest frowned slightly, not fully understanding, but sensing something deeper, as if an unusual truth floated in the air. The wife lowered her gaze. The husband barely nodded, still under the spell of the footprints, of the moment... of her.

Luciana then looked up at the starry sky and, with a slight smile, added:

"Some dreams weigh more than others."

The priest looked at the gentleman with growing surprise, confused but intrigued, and asked gently:
"Did you fall?" he continued in a pastoral but inquisitive tone. "Your knees, your hands... your face... your lips... are covered in dirt. It's as if you've prostrated yourself here... as if you've kissed the ground."

Luciana burst out laughing, lively, crystalline, melodious, mocking, yet enchanting, which mingled with the whisper of the night wind. That laugh, light as a breeze, yet laden with meaning, seemed to envelop everyone.

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Luciana had her arms elegantly crossed. Her boots, immaculate and firm on the ground, contrasted with the image of the man covered in dust. She took a step forward, and her boots crunched on the earth, right on top of the very footprints the man had sought to kiss.
"He didn't fall, Father," she said, with mischief in her eyes. "It's just that sometimes the earth holds something so precious... that one can't help but adore it. Isn't that right, sir?"
"Perhaps the ground seemed... too worthy not to kiss," she said, not looking directly at the priest, but with a look that knew exactly what it provoked.

The man bowed his head. His wife, close by, far from moving away, said nothing. She simply stroked her husband's hair again, a gesture that wasn't one of censure, but of acceptance. Then she slipped a loving hand over her husband's shoulder and, in a soft but firm voice, whispered, "Perhaps it was a dream... or perhaps not."

The priest, confused but wise, decided not to ask any more questions.
"Faith takes curious forms," he murmured, and walked slowly away.

Luciana smiled once more, turned on the heels of her boots, leaving new footprints in the ground, and walked slowly toward the illuminated area of the camp. Her boots marked the dust with precision, as if each step wrote a story. And the man—without being asked—looked back at the ground.

The priest said nothing more. But he watched as the man looked, once more, at the receding footsteps.

The priest had the doctor stand beside him and showed the gentleman, saying, "If he's on his hands, knees, and face again on the floor, we'll take him to the infirmary, along with his wife." Noted and done, the gentleman prostrated himself and kissed the ground Luciana had stepped on. He was taken to the infirmary along with his wife.

Luciana, noticing the commotion, went to the scene of the commotion, where she was asked to go to the infirmary. She did so. The priest was waiting for her. She stopped in front of the priest. Her boots tapped softly on the infirmary floor as the moon shed its light through the window. She crossed her arms, raising an eyebrow slightly with a mixture of mischief and resignation.
"I'll talk to them on Tuesday," she said, gently but firmly.

The priest, with his hands clasped and his brow slightly furrowed, looked at her with that mixture of pastoral patience and human bewilderment. Finally, he said, "Please, daughter... now." Don't you see what you're causing?

Luciana sighed and glanced sideways at the room where the gentleman and his wife were being treated by the doctor. The man, still with dirt on his lips, seemed calm now. His wife cared for him without reproach, with a stillness that spoke of acceptance rather than submission.

She looked back at the priest and smiled warmly.
"I don't cause anything that isn't already in their hearts, Father. I just... pass by where they're looking."

The priest shook his head, defeated by a logic he couldn't refute with dogma.

Luciana then took a step closer and lowered her voice:
"But that's fine. I'll talk now... if you promise to listen to me with your heart, not just your habit."

The priest nodded, and together they walked away to a quiet corner of the infirmary. Outside, the night continued its course, and the earth held the warmth of kisses that, though strange, were no less sincere.

Luciana's eyes moistened as she said, "Who am I or what am I, Father? Am I a curse or a victim of it? Older women look at me as if I were sin or as if I were a tempting devil! Many times you told me I was an angel on earth, but aren't I a demon? Sin is not in the woman or in her body, sin is in the mind of man! It would be better if I disappeared!" And she began to cry.

The priest remained silent. For a moment, he was not the spiritual guide, nor the man of faith, but simply a human being facing the pain of a young woman who carried more weight than her age deserved.
He approached gently and took her hands.
"Luciana..." he said, his voice tempered by age and compassion. "My child, what you just said is true: sin is not in the body, nor in the woman, nor in you." Sin is born when the heart is driven by selfishness, disordered desire, or uncharitable judgment. But you... you are not a curse.

She looked at him, tears streaming down her cheeks.
"So why do they fear me? Why do some hate me and others adore me? Why do they point fingers at me, if I am just who I am... without malice?"

The priest sighed deeply. He looked toward the closed door of the room where the gentleman lay, and then at the young woman who was crying like a child lost in a forest of prejudice.
"Because the world, Luciana, still doesn't know how to look with clear eyes. Many struggle to see the light without being blinded. Some desire you greedily, others despise you for not being able to possess you. But that doesn't tell you who you are... only who they are."

She lowered her gaze. The priest placed his hand on her head, fatherly.
"You are neither angel nor demon, daughter... You are human. And that, in itself, is a miracle. Don't disappear. On the contrary... stay, grow, love. And, if you can, forgive them... even if they don't understand."

Luciana closed her eyes, still crying, but no longer in despair. The priest's words were like balm on a long-open wound. Outside, the night seemed silent... as if the sky was also listening.

Luciana looked up, her eyes still moist, but now shining with a new determination. His voice, firm and clear, echoed in the darkness of the sacristy:
"We'll talk about me later, Father... but now there's a couple who need us. Let's go!"

The priest nodded, moved by the young woman's mixture of tenderness and strength. Luciana left first, crossing the threshold with a confident stride. The priest followed her, adjusting his glasses as he murmured a short prayer.

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When they reached the small adjoining room, they found the man and woman sitting together on a wooden bench. Both were of a certain age, perhaps in their fifties or sixties. The man still had dirt on his hands and face, especially his lips, and the woman held his arm, nervous but loving, like someone trying to protect a broken heart without breaking her own.

Luciana stopped in front of them. Her eyes, still filled with tears, were now compassionate.
"Love doesn't disappear with age," she said gently. "But sometimes words are lost, and what remains are actions... like prostrating yourself in silence, with your soul bare, seeking forgiveness or comfort. Don't be ashamed. Even in pain, there is beauty."

The priest added gently:
"Sometimes, when one stumbles and falls to one's knees, it's not the ground that receives you, but mercy." You have lived, you have loved... and now you just need to listen to each other with your hearts.

The lady nodded, her eyes moist.

The gentleman, his voice breaking, murmured:
"I fell... yes... but not out of weakness, but because I no longer knew how to stand without her."

Luciana sat down beside him and took his hand warmly.
"And here we are. So that you don't walk alone."

And in that gesture, more than in any sermon, true grace was revealed.

Luciana leaned slightly toward the couple sitting on the wooden bench. Her voice sounded kind, with a light tone that sought to break the ice while remaining respectful. With a warm smile, she asked:
"You're at the sacramental talk, aren't you?" And then, with a gentle wink of complicity, "Are you parents, boyfriends, or godparents?"

The lady let out a soft laugh, as if surprised by the young woman's naturalness. The gentleman smiled too, still with dirt on his lips, but his eyes now more alive, as if Luciana's simple tone had reminded them that, despite everything, they were still part of something special.

They looked at each other, and the gentleman, somewhat shyly but affectionately, replied:
"We've been married... for many years. But we've also come as godparents. We want to help a young couple get a good start in life."

Luciana nodded tenderly, and her eyes shone as she said:
"So you're here for love... for the love you've experienced and the one you want to share. How beautiful. Welcome."

The priest, to one side, watched in silence. But his gaze held approval. Luciana, once again, with a single question, had touched the hearts of those before her.

Luciana looked at them affectionately with a sweet but firm smile. Then, addressing the gentleman with a mixture of affection and determination, she said:
"Godparents at a wedding ceremony, best man and maid of honor. You know you must be an example to your godchildren at their wedding... And you, sir," she added, gently pointing at him with her gaze, "must honor and revere your wife as well."

The gentleman blinked, surprised, but then lowered his head with an embarrassed smile. The lady looked at him tenderly and took his hand.

Luciana continued, with a twinkle in her eyes:
"Godparents are not just witnesses, but guides. If your godchildren see you walking together, respecting each other, loving each other with simple gestures, with tenderness and dedication... then they will know how to build their own love as well."

The priest nodded silently, letting Luciana speak.

The lady, moved, murmured:
"Thank you, daughter. It's been a long time since anyone spoke to us like that."

And Luciana sweetly said:
"True love never ages... it only grows wiser."

Smiling mischievously, Luciana crossed her arms and leaned lightly on one leg, her head tilted as she watched Ernesto's steps. Then she said, with a charming mix of playfulness and firmness:
"Ernesto... is this how you wish to carry me? Barely holding my hand and putting your arm around me as if you were carrying a grocery bag?" She laughed softly, without malice. "Try again! Doña Carmen won't be angry, will she, Doña Carmen?"

Carmen burst out laughing and said:
"Of course not! She'd better do it right," and winked at Luciana.

Luciana then added, with almost theatrical warmth:
"Carry her as if the whole town were watching. As if the honor of walking with such a woman gave you strength in your knees and light in your eyes." As if by carrying her, you were carrying God's most precious gift.

Ernesto stood still for a second, swallowed again, then took a deep breath... and this time he approached Carmen with more determination. Not only did he take her hand, but he knelt before her for a moment, kissed her hand reverently, and then, standing up, put both arms around her and walked slowly, with the bearing of a lovelorn gentleman, across the room.

Luciana smiled, her eyes shining, and murmured:
"Good, now!"

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Then Luciana said, "Carmen, at the meeting you said your husband prefers to take young ladies instead of everyone else. How does he take them?"

Carmen raised her eyebrows in a mixture of surprise and embarrassment, while everyone in the room held their breath, attentive to what she was going to say. Luciana had phrased the question sweetly, but also with a clear intention: to provoke reflection and, perhaps, a change.
Carmen smiled nervously and replied, "Well... he sometimes offers to take young girls when they're tired or joking around, he gives them piggyback rides or rides on his shoulders... and he laughs with them, he shows them off... it hasn't been like that with me for a while," she concluded in a low voice.

Luciana nodded slowly, then approached with a warm but firm gaze. She placed a hand on Carmen's shoulder and said calmly, "Ernesto, did you hear?" It's not about how young a woman is, but how much love and honor are placed in carrying her. Young ladies get off your shoulders and forget you. But your wife... she's been by your side forever. Why not treat her like a queen? As you yourself said years ago at the altar.

Ernesto lowered his gaze. The atmosphere became solemn.

Luciana then added, without losing the tenderness in her voice:
"How are you carrying them, Ernesto? And why don't you carry Carmen like that? Doesn't she deserve even more?"

There was silence... and then, very slowly, Ernesto took a step toward Carmen.

And Don Ernesto led Doña Carmen. First, he offered her his hand, but Luciana looked at him silently, one eyebrow raised. Then he smiled with resignation and tenderness, crouched carefully in front of his wife, and with a gentle gesture indicated that she should get in.

Doña Carmen hesitated for a moment, surprised. But Luciana's encouraging look and the soft applause of those around them gave her courage. She settled herself with dignity on her husband's shoulders, who slowly stood up, holding her firmly.

Everyone in the room held their breath for a moment, then burst into applause and smiles.

Don Ernesto walked with her around the room, his gait serene and his face solemn, as if he were fulfilling an ancient promise. Doña Carmen, moved, looked down at him with a mixture of amazement and joy, her eyes shining.

Luciana, with her hands on her hips, watched the scene with satisfaction. Then she said:
"This is how you lead a wife. With honor, with love, and with pride. May this example not be forgotten by either the bride or the godparents."

And everyone applauded again, moved by the symbolic force of that simple yet powerful act.

Hearing the murmur at the door, Luciana walked briskly toward it. She opened it gently but firmly and found herself standing before a young couple with anxious faces.

The young man, somewhat breathless, said:
"Excuse me, we're the bride and groom... we're here for the talk... Don Ernesto and Doña Carmen are our godparents..."

Luciana narrowed her eyes for a few seconds, observing them closely, and then she gave a wide, welcoming smile.
"Oh, are you the bride and groom?" she said warmly. "Come in, you're just in time to learn something important."

He led them in, and when the young couple crossed the door and saw Don Ernesto carrying Doña Carmen on his shoulders, they were perplexed for a moment, and then lit up.
"Just look!" exclaimed the groom. "He's my godfather! And he's carrying the matron of honor!"

The bride covered her mouth with both hands, a mixture of astonishment and tenderness. Doña Carmen, from above, raised her hand in greeting with a mixture of embarrassment and pride. Don Ernesto, sweaty but firm, moved a little further until he stopped in front of them.

Luciana, now standing between the two couples, said clearly:
"The best men and women are not just witnesses. They are examples. And this act," she said, pointing her palm toward Don Ernesto, "is a living promise: of support, of sacrifice, of lovingly carrying whomever one chooses to love each day."

The bride and groom held hands, moved. And in that instant, the silence in the room became solemn and meaningful.

Luciana looked at everyone, satisfied, and concluded:
"This is how a marriage begins: with dedication. And this is how it inspires: with actions, not just words."

Murmurs grew in the room as people slowly filed out, commenting among themselves in amazement and admiration.

"Luciana did it!" someone exclaimed from the back. Don Ernesto isn't being ridden by a young girl, but by his wife!

Don Ernesto, being ridden by Doña Carmen with a mixture of pride and redemption, said nothing, but his gaze sought Luciana's. She held his gaze with firm tenderness and nodded slightly, as if approving the gesture.
"Thank you," he said in a whisper, just for her.

Luciana then turned to the rest and, raising her voice, concluded:
"Being godparents isn't just giving advice; it's showing with body and soul that love deserves actions... not just words."

And so, with that scene still vivid in everyone's memory, those in attendance knew they had witnessed more than just a discussion of the sacraments: they had seen the miracle of reconciliation through an act of sincere love.

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Luciana looked at the priest, as if asking, "Is there any activity missing? Shall we conclude the meeting?"

The priest, understanding Luciana's gaze, smiled and responded calmly:
"Dear Luciana, the meeting has fulfilled its purpose: to remember the bonds that unite us, from baptism to marriage, through communion and confirmation, and the responsibility to guide others. What we experienced here has been more than just dynamics; it has been a testimony of community, of mutual respect, of meaningful play, and of joyful learning."

Then, looking at everyone present, she added:
"There is no activity more meaningful than recognizing the value of others, honoring our roles, and growing in harmony. If there are no further interventions, we can close this meeting with a prayer and a community embrace."

Luciana nodded gently, satisfied. She walked with firm steps to the center of the space, clasped her hands, and bowed her head slightly, as if calling for silence. The men and women imitated her, forming a large circle.

The priest gave a few final words of blessing, and when he finished, there was spontaneous applause. Then, amid smiles and soft laughter, those in attendance approached one another, hugged, and shared warm words. Some godfathers and goddaughters looked at each other with pride, other groups shared the lessons they had learned, and many still smiled, the echo of the dynamics in their hearts.

Several men, with tenderness and respect, carried the women on their shoulders or piggybacking, as a symbol of care, commitment, and shared play. It wasn't a competition or an obligation, but a living expression of affection and the joy of being together, where strength was proudly offered and trust was placed without reservation.
Some carried their goddaughters, others their godmothers or their best friends. There was laughter, playful comments, and knowing glances. An elderly woman, who had been a godmother on more than one occasion, was carried by her godson with a mixture of pride and gentleness. A young woman, her laughter brimming over, said to her godfather: "Don't fall, I trust you like no one else!"

Luciana, seeing them, smiled. She stood with her hands on her hips, watching how the generations interacted, how the bonds were reaffirmed not only with words but with concrete gestures. At that moment, one of her godfathers—the one from her confirmation—approached, crouched in front of her, and wordlessly waited. Luciana naturally climbed onto her godfather's shoulders. He stood up firmly and began taking firm steps, walking through the center of the room.
Following the horse-riding pair were Luciana's baptismal godfather and Luciana's First Communion godfather.

Silence fell. Everyone turned toward her.

From her height, Luciana raised her voice:
"Thank you all... this is who we are: trust, strength, love, and faith. This is community."

Spontaneous applause erupted. And so, on the shoulders of her sponsor and the affection of those present, Luciana closed the gathering, leaving it etched in everyone's memory as an act of collective love.

Luciana rode on the shoulders of her confirmation sponsor, followed by her other two sponsors.
The four of them headed to the stable at the back of the grounds, where young Luciana had left her horses before the ceremony. The moonlight tinged the aged wood of the stable with silver.

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As soon as Luciana crossed the threshold of the stable, riding, a faint murmur filled the air. Her human horses, their reins tied by her and locked by her in their stalls, sensed her presence. The very atmosphere was transformed at the sight of her nearness: a mixture of suppressed emotion and reverent submission.

From inside the closed stalls, unmistakable sounds began to be heard: low, human, symbolic whinnying, emanating from each of them. Some were loud, others timid, but all communicated the same thing: we know you are here.

Hearing them, Luciana halted her confirmation sponsor, her horse. She smiled with tenderness and admiration, like someone listening to their herd respond to their silent call. Her sponsor below her, and her two other sponsors, to the sides and behind her, watched in silence, understanding that this bond was deeper than anyone could imagine.
"You feel me," Luciana said softly, without surprise, with the gentleness of someone accustomed to inspiring obedience and affection.

The godfather stopped in front of the row of closed doors. The doors that were closed were unlocked, because Luciana had them, and the horses' reins were tied precisely. Through the cracks, one could perceive the calm breathing and the occasional snort of their human mounts, resting after having served her. They were her closest devotees, carefully selected, and on that special day they had been relieved of their primary role to give the godparents the spotlight.

Luciana gently climbed down from the godfather's shoulders, her boots clinking as they touched the floor. She approached each door, checking the locks, making sure everything was in order, and gently placed the palm of her hand on the wood. Instantly, from inside, a shaky, almost grateful sigh was heard. Then she scanned the other stalls. Heads peeked discreetly through the cracks, their eyes searching for a glimpse of her, their bodies tense with the excitement of having her so close.
"Calm down, my faithful," she said softly. "You have done well. Now, rest. You will take me back when the time comes."

The whinnying ceased, transforming into a devout silence. The mounts calmed, comforted by Luciana's voice, by her presence, by her promise. Luciana returned to the center of the stable, took the keys one by one, and checked that each lock was secure.

Luciana's godparents looked at her with respect, understanding that these men were not mere instruments, but part of the deep bond Luciana wove with those who admired her and served her loyally. She stroked one of the doors like someone silently thanking them.

Don Mauricio flinched with a barely perceptible start, but Luciana noticed it.

She needed only a glance to read him completely. She turned toward him with a gentle, almost mischievous smile and walked a few steps until she was standing right in front of the empty stall, whose door, curiously, was ajar, as if waiting for him.
"Do you really want to...?" she asked, without finishing the sentence, letting the implication complete itself in her mind.

As she spoke, her finger slowly rose and pointed directly toward the open door of the empty stall. Her gaze sparked with a mixture of defiance, tenderness, and undeniable authority. The silence that followed her question was deep and dense, as if the entire stable was holding its breath.

Don Mauricio, a man of experience and character, felt the blood pounding in his temples. His throat went dry. That gesture, that barely uttered but powerful question, enveloped him, called to him, disarmed him.
"I..." he began, but his voice cracked, caught between doubt and surrender.

Luciana said no more. She didn't need to convince him. She just looked at him, with the absolute calm of someone who knows the other has already decided, even if he doesn't say so yet. Then she stepped aside, leaving the path clear toward the stall.

Don Mauricio swallowed, his eyes rested on the half-open door... and he took a step toward it.

Don Mauricio, the horse, obedient and silent, entered the stall as if recognizing his destination. Luciana followed with serene, almost ceremonial steps. Inside the space, everything was in order: clean, prepared, the air filled with the unmistakable aroma of leather, wood, and respect.

With the same precision as she had done before, Luciana took the bridle and placed it on Don Mauricio's head, firmly and carefully. Her hands were gentle, but her control was total. Then, without a word, she tied the reins to the iron ring fixed to the wall. The slight sound of the knot tightening was the only response.

She paused for a moment to contemplate the scene: her horse still, subdued, surrendered.

Without rushing, she left the stall. She took the door and closed it with a firm bang, then inserted the key, turned it... click. Secured. Sealed. She took the key and kept it with her.

Finally, without looking back, Luciana left the stable with her upright, elegant gait, leaving behind her a reverent silence, interrupted only by the slow breathing of the human mounts in their stalls.

Outside, the night continued its course, and Luciana's figure walked away with the certainty of someone who had done what she had to do.

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Luciana returned to the stable, where the empty stalls waited in the shadows.
With the same calm and determination, she gently called the next horse. Her first communion godfather looked at her with respect and understanding; no words were needed. He walked to the stall she indicated, his gait marked by a mixture of honor, acceptance, and destiny.
She accompanied him silently, closing the distance with soft steps. Once inside, Luciana took the bridle, adjusted it with that perfect blend of tenderness and mastery, and tied the reins to the metal ring with the same skill as before. She closed the door. She turned and put away the key. Another loop sealed, another connection secured.

Then, without haste, she called the third.
The godfather, older than the others, was already standing. When she looked at him and gave a small nod, he nodded without reservation and walked to the third stall. The scene was repeated with increasing solemnity: bridle in place, reins tied, gate closed, key turned.

The three stalls occupied.

The horses, now in their places, sheltered, tied firmly and elegantly by Luciana's own hands, remained a symbol of a personal history made up of deep bonds, shared moments, and Luciana's authority, which needed no words to impose itself.

Luciana paused, looking at the three closed stalls, each housing one of her most senior horses, her three sponsors. The air was serene, charged with unspoken respect, as if the night itself recognized the solemnity of the moment.

In a soft but firm voice, she said:
"You took care of me... now I take care of you."

Her words were not an announcement, but a promise. It was not an act of power, but of love; It wasn't a surrender on their part, but rather a mutual commitment that had been cultivated over years of affection, guidance, and presence. Each had been by her side at key moments in her life, and now Luciana, now a true lady, protected them in her own way: with respect, with firmness, with that tenderness that only she knew how to interweave with dominance.

After a moment of silence, she turned and walked away, her upright and confident figure moving away into the dim light. The keys jingled with an almost ceremonial sound. She didn't look back. There was no need to. They knew they were safe... and under the care of the one who honored them most.

Luciana met the priest at the stable exit. He, who had carefully observed everything that had happened, approached with a serene smile and an inquisitive look.

"Will you do the same with your future best man?" he asked in a calm but direct tone.

Luciana didn't hesitate. Her eyes shone with determination, and a haughty, charming smile spread across her face.
"From this moment on, if necessary!" she declared, with a mixture of sweetness and authority that impressed even the wisest.

The priest nodded silently, understanding that Luciana left nothing to chance. With each step she took, she sealed her path with character, gratitude, and an unwavering will.

Luciana said,
"My future best man, whoever he may be, has been warned: as soon as he accepts this role, he will also accept his place... with the reins tightly tied."

The priest barely raised his eyebrows, surprised by Luciana's firmness.

Luciana, without lowering her gaze or losing her smile, added serenely,
"...and his rider on top of him."

There was a brief silence. The wind gently moved Luciana's hair as she maintained her upright and confident posture, radiating an imposing presence. She didn't say this with arrogance, but with deep conviction: whoever decided to be her best man must understand that her commitment wasn't symbolic, but total. Just as she honored and cared for those who were with her in her early years, she also guided and rode for them when necessary.

The priest nodded slowly, understanding that, for Luciana, caring and dominating weren't opposites. In her world, whoever gave themselves to her did so with pride... and with their foreheads to the ground if necessary.

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Luciana asked the priest: "Do you want one too?"

The priest remained motionless for a moment. Luciana's question, asked naturally but with a penetrating gaze, touched his soul. She looked at him with that mixture of sweetness and authority that disarmed any defense.

"Do you want one too?" she repeated, in a soft but firm voice, taking a step toward him.

The man of faith, accustomed to guiding and advising, felt the weight shift at that moment. It wasn't him who was leading. It was her who was deciding. And in that question there was no mockery or challenge, only an implicit truth: she was a rider, and whoever surrendered to her guidance did so not out of humiliation, but out of devotion.

The priest lowered his head slightly, speechless, and Luciana, satisfied with the silent response, said no more. She smiled again, serene, and with a luminous and calm gaze, turned around.

She knew that, in time, everyone found their place. And many, on their knees, found it right at her feet.

He said, "Yes."

Luciana stopped at the word. Slowly turning on her heels, her gaze met the priest's. He held hers with a mixture of respect, devotion, and a restrained emotion difficult to name.

"Yes," he repeated more clearly, as if sealing a profound decision.

Luciana looked at him in silence for a few seconds, then walked toward him with a firm, confident stride, like someone who knew she wasn't imposing, but rather responding to a mutual call. When she arrived in front of him, she raised an eyebrow and said, "Then prepare yourself."

Without needing further words, he nodded humbly. She extended a hand, guiding him with the same gentleness with which she had previously been guided in her own life by the godparents she now protected. But this time, she was the one who carried the authority and care.

The atmosphere became solemn and silent, as if everyone understood that this was not a mockery or a game. Luciana rode on the priest's shoulders with poise and grace. The priest serenely supported her, walking respectfully under her guidance. It was not a scene of vain power, but of trust, gratitude, and surrender.

As they advanced, she whispered with a smile:
"From this moment on... if necessary."
And it was.

Horse and rider crossed the courtyard with a serene gait. The sound of the priest's footsteps on the packed earth accompanied the rhythm of their breathing. Luciana, standing on the priest's shoulders, held the reins firmly, her imposing and confident posture contrasting with the stillness of the night.

The other horses, from their posts, sensed her presence. A murmur of human neighs was heard, soft and subdued, a mixture of respect and recognition. Some mounts lowered their heads in submission; others barely peeked out through the cracks in the doors, obedient after being secured by their rider.

Luciana and the priest arrived in front of the empty stall.

She dismounted with the same elegance with which she had ridden, dismounting lightly. She looked into his eyes. He said nothing; he already knew what was coming.

Luciana opened the door, looked at him, and in a soft but firm voice said:
"Come in."

The priest entered the stall.

She delicately took the bridle and put it on. Then she tied the reins to the ring on the wall with a secure knot, slowly but surely. When she finished, she stepped back, closed the stall door, turned the key with a small click, and put it away.

He stood for a moment looking inside. Then he smiled slightly and whispered:
"Now then."

And with one last glance at her faithful, she turned and left the stable. Behind her, the doors remained still, but inside, hearts beat fast. For those who were chosen by her, there was no greater glory than neighing at the feeling of her near.

Luciana left the stable. The echo of her footsteps faded, and in the silence that remained, everything was said.

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#65 2025-07-29 06:08:00

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The Stable Stall (4)

At 3:00 a.m., when the town was fast asleep and silence enveloped the streets with its blanket of light fog, Luciana rose unhurriedly. She put on her light coat, took the keys to the stable and the stalls, and headed for the barn, where her horses had been resting in their respective stalls since the evening.
The wooden gate creaked faintly when she opened it. Inside, the air smelled of leather, effort, and sleeping obedience. With a firm and unhurried step, Luciana approached the first stall. She inserted the key into the lock, turned it with a soft click, and opened the door.

Luciana stood majestically, illuminated only by the faint moonlight that filtered through the cracks in the barn.

The horse, still asleep, breathed slowly, oblivious to the time. Luciana stroked its head and, in a soft but clear voice, said:
"Wake up, it's time."

The man opened his eyes, immediately recognizing that voice. Wordlessly, with the same docility he had shown throughout the event, he allowed Luciana to untie the reins from the ring, remove the bridle, and carefully hang it in its place, next to the corresponding name.

Finally, she gave him a loving swipe of the whip on the horse's thigh and, in a firm voice, instructed him:
"You've done your duty, now... go home."

And so he did. With somewhat unsteady steps, the man left the stable, gradually disappearing into the darkness of the early morning.

Luciana repeated the ritual with each of her horses: she opened the door, woke the "horse," precisely untied the reins, carefully untied the reins, hung each bridle in perfect order, and with a flick of her whip, gave them the order to return.

One by one, with silent and reverent steps, the human horses walked away silently, obediently, without complaint from their weary bodies, returning to their homes under the cover of dawn. None dared to disobey her, even though the night air made them shudder. They knew their role was over for now, and that they would return when she called them. Their shadows blurred on the cobblestone streets of the sleeping town. Some walked upright, others still felt the echo of Luciana's weight on their backs, and the rest advanced on all fours.

When she released the last one, Luciana closed the stable door again, put away the keys, and watched her horses, who were returning home under the pale light of an almost surrendered moon.

The horses returned to their homes like those returning from a pilgrimage. All of them, except for three figures, who didn't move: Esteban, her boyfriend, remained on his knees, looking at her with a mixture of love, devotion, and belonging. Andrés, her most faithful worshiper, remained prostrate, his forehead touching the ground, waiting for orders like a servant who finds purpose in submission. The priest, for his part, remained there, in the shadows, his gaze lost and his lips sealed with shock. Something in his soul still hadn't fully assimilated what he had experienced.

Luciana looked at them with a mixture of tenderness and firmness. She had a different place for each of them in her life: for Esteban, in her heart; for Andrés, in her will; and for the priest… in her soul. None of the three asked to stay. None of the three hesitated. They simply remained.

Luciana watched them for a moment. Then she walked slowly among them, without saying a word, knowing that none of the three would dare to leave without her permission. The night was not over for them. Then she said, "Esteban and Andrés, leave. I'll stay with Father Celestino, I'll get him ready, and he'll take me."

Esteban and Andrés exchanged a brief glance. They said nothing. They knew that when Luciana spoke in that low but firm tone, there was no room for discussion. She stood, her figure outlined by the dim light inside, with the same presence that had so many times made them kneel without asking.
"Okay, Luciana," Esteban said with a slight nod.
"At your service," Andrés whispered, lowering his head before turning away.

They both walked away in silence, obedient and still devout, knowing there was no jealousy between them, only a tacit recognition of the different roles each occupied in her life.
Luciana slowly turned toward the priest, who still remained on the floor, stunned by the intensity of everything he had experienced that night.
"Father Celestino," she said, advancing toward him with confident steps. "Now it's your turn. I will bridle and saddle you... and you will be ridden by me."

The early morning breeze caressed the scene. Luciana closed the cabin door behind them, not violently, but with the serene firmness of someone who knows she is in control of the moment. Outside, the village slept. Inside, another offering was being sealed.

Luciana approached Father Celestino with imposing calm, while he remained on his knees, still not fully recovered. She leaned forward slightly, gently placed a hand under Father Celestino's chin, and raised the priest's face so that he would look into her eyes. Her voice, serene but charged with power, sounded like a sacred echo in the darkness:
"Breathe, Father... surrender."

The priest obeyed without thinking, as if something beyond his will was guiding him.

Luciana turned and walked gracefully to her bag, from which she took out the straps, saddle, and reins. She showed them to the priest without needing to explain. He nodded, and without her having to ask, he assumed the all-fours position. Slowly, with almost liturgical delicacy, Luciana placed the bridle on the priest, adjusting the bit firmly. Then she expertly placed the saddle on the priest's back and secured the cinches under Father Celestino's abdomen. Finally, she took the reins and, with a solemn gesture, wrapped them around his wrist.
"You are ready," she said in a voice soft but sharp as a bell at dawn. "You will be my mount, my guide... my penitent."
Luciana climbed onto him gracefully, shifting her weight naturally in the saddle. Her boots rested in the stirrups, her posture erect, her countenance radiant. Domination was not violence or cruelty, but a spiritual truth shared between them.
"Go ahead," she commanded. "Take me to the place I will tell you about."

And so, in the gloom of early morning, amid whispers and firm footsteps, Father Celestino was ridden by Luciana, performing a penance that was also a revelation.

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From that night, that wonderful night, the events narrated in "Supernatural" unfolded.
The invitation is extended.

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#67 2025-07-29 07:27:47

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Drunkenness (1)

At a gathering of friends, under the influence of alcohol, they asked Esteban: "Why are you being ridden by Luciana?" "Before you, Luciana had another boyfriend who was also ridden by her, but when he became her horse, he stopped being her boyfriend." "I'm surprised you're friends with Andrés, Luciana's pet."

Esteban pressed his lips together and lowered his gaze for a moment. The laughter of some, somewhere between nervous and mocking, struck him harder than words. The heat of the liquor in his throat mingled with the heat of wounded pride. He didn't respond immediately. He looked at his glass, turned it between his fingers, and then looked up. His expression was serene, but his eyes burned with a mixture of determination and defiance.
"Luciana doesn't allow me to be ridden by her," he said in a firm voice. "She honors me with that right."

The murmurs ceased for a moment. Esteban's tone was neither defensive nor aggressive; He was clear and sincere.
"And if one day she stops seeing me as her boyfriend," he added, "then I will stop being her boyfriend... but I won't stop being her horse, I won't stop loving her. Because she isn't just any woman. She's destiny."

Some lowered their gaze, others pretended to sip their glasses. But one dared to say:
"And Andrés? Doesn't it hurt you that she's adopted him as her pet?"

Esteban sighed, then smiled faintly.
"Andrés adores her, yes. I do too. We are not enemies. We are devoted to the same Goddess. He is the pet... and I am the chosen one."
Then, he stood up, raised his glass, and concluded:
"Let's toast Luciana. Whoever has been ridden by her knows there is no greater glory. And whoever has been led by her... never forgets."

Those present fell silent. Then, as if obeying a common impulse, they also raised their glasses and toasted. At that moment, they knew Esteban wasn't just Luciana's boyfriend... he was her fiancée.

One of those present said to Esteban, "Introduce me to your girlfriend," he replied, "Why? She's the one who chooses, not me."

The group laughed with some discomfort, but also with respect. Esteban's words were like sentences, brief and precise, impossible to refute.

"Why?" he repeated, looking directly at the questioner. "She's the one who chooses, not me."

A thick silence fell, as if everyone at that gathering remembered a time when Luciana had looked at them... or not. It wasn't enough to want to know her, or to desire her. Luciana was like fire: one couldn't approach her without being burned.

Another, bolder because of the liquor, said mockingly, "But if you're her boyfriend, shouldn't you have some power?"

Esteban narrowed his eyes, but his smile didn't fade.
"Of course I have power," he replied. "The power to hold her without trembling, to carry her without missing a step, to withstand her weight without complaining, and to remain silent when her voice decides."

Then he leaned forward slightly, the already empty glass between his fingers.
"You want to know her so you can try riding her. I know her, and that's why it's enough for me to serve her."

And no one else joked about that again.

Esteban said, "All of you want to be Luciana's horses, to be ridden by her. But none of us can make any decisions about that, because she's the one who decides."

The group fell silent. Esteban's words were not spoken with anger or resentment, but with a clarity that pierced the pride of each one. He spoke with the calm of one who has been tested and accepted.

“You all want to be Luciana’s horses, to be ridden by her,” he repeated slowly, looking at each of those present. “But none of us can make any decisions about that, because she is the one who decides.”

Someone murmured, almost regretfully:
“But if one truly loves her…”

Esteban shook his head gently.
“Love is not enough. You can love, desire, hope, serve… But she doesn’t choose the one who insists the most, but the one who understands her the most. And when she chooses, she does so without explanation. It is not a reward, it is not a punishment. It is simply her will.”

A younger man, with a tone somewhere between defiant and wounded, asked:
“And doesn’t it hurt to share her?”

Esteban smiled for the first time in the entire conversation, but it was a melancholy smile.
“Share what? She is not mine. She never has been. I am only allowed to be near… when she wants it. And that, my friends, is more than many of you have ever had.”

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#68 2025-07-29 07:32:14

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The Drunkenness (2)

An older man intervened, saying, "Stop bothering young Esteban, Miss Luciana's boyfriend, your dream rider. He serves her while you touch yourselves."

The older man's words fell like a hammer on the table.
"Stop bothering young Esteban," he repeated in a firm, deep voice, with the authority that only years and experience can bestow. "He's Miss Luciana's boyfriend, your dream rider. He serves her, while you... touch yourselves."

There was nervous laughter, a few uncomfortable glances. No one dared to openly contradict him.

"And what do you mean by that, Don Amílcar?" one of them asked, trying to defend himself between jokes.

"What you heard. You fantasize, you talk, you imagine being ridden by her, dreaming of her choosing you," the old man continued. But at the end of the day, they kneel without her asking them to, and wallow in their own frustrations. Esteban, on the other hand, walks beneath her, he is ridden by her, he obeys Luciana's voice and remains silent. That's why she rides him. That's why he is where you will never be: beneath Luciana.

The room fell silent. No one knew whether to feel ashamed, defeated, or simply exposed. Esteban just lowered his gaze, as if Don Amílcar's words had expressed what he never dared to say.

And the old man, with a sigh, concluded:
"Serve a woman like Luciana well, if you ever have the good fortune to have her look upon you. In the meantime, do not judge one who is already ridden by his destiny."

The voices lowered, but the weight of the words did not diminish.

One of them, his face still flushed with shame and suppressed rage, murmured:
"What hurts me most... is that Don Amílcar said we touched ourselves for Luciana..."

Another, without looking directly at him, exhaled with resignation and responded with brutal honesty:
"Isn't it true?"

There was a deeper silence, one born not of scandal, but of recognition. In that instant, none of those present could deny the obvious: all of them, secretly, had dreamed of Luciana. They didn't just admire her beauty or her strength, but they longed to surrender to her will, to be chosen, ridden, dominated by her... although they would never admit it out loud.

One of the younger ones, almost in a whisper, added:
"I have... I've done it. And I'm not proud to say it, but when I saw her in those high-heeled boots, walking upright through the plaza... I knelt without realizing it."

The others didn't laugh. They simply lowered their gaze, as if this instinctive act were, in reality, a shared ritual. No one dared continue to deny it.

Amidst it all, Esteban remained silent. He felt no superiority, no pride. He only understood what the others had yet to fully accept: Luciana wasn't conquered. Luciana chose. And for some reason, she had chosen him... although she had also kept him prostrate, his will surrendered and his body surrendered to her desire.

The confessions began to flow like a pent-up spring.

One, his voice trembling between guilt and devotion, said:
"I... I have kissed the ground she trod. The traces of her footsteps. Because they are holy."

A murmur ran through the group, and another, farther away, without a trace of irony or mockery, added:
"Lucky Esteban... he doesn't just kiss the footprints... he also kisses the boots."

Esteban lowered his eyes. Not because he felt ashamed, but because what he'd said was true. He had kissed Luciana's boots. With his hands on her ankles, his forehead against the shiny leather, his lips trembling as they touched the heels that made him feel small. Not as punishment, but out of pure devotion.

Don Amílcar, who was still nearby, said firmly:
"At least Esteban does it in full view of everyone, with the dignity of one who serves his Mistress, Owner, and Lady. You, on the other hand, hide in the shadows and are ashamed of your desire."

No one responded. Because deep down, everyone knew he was right. Luciana had conquered them without even trying. And that was what hurt the most... and what fascinated the most.

Another, with a mixture of resignation and admiration, murmured:
"Lucky Esteban... because he is the ground on which Luciana walks."

The silence was dense for a moment, until another, encouraged by that powerful image, added:
"If it's about kissing the ground Luciana walked on... then kissing him is the closest thing we'll ever get to her."

Several looked at each other, as if they had just heard a sacred truth. Esteban, in their midst, did not move. His face remained serene, almost solemn. He did not feel humiliated. On the contrary, he knew he was privileged.

Because while the others dreamed of serving her, he was already doing so. Not with empty words or hidden sighs. He was the support beneath Luciana's feet, her silent support. The ground, the stone of the path, the piece of flesh upon which she rose as Queen.

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#69 2025-07-29 08:22:36

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The Drunkenness (3)

One of them asked Esteban, "Weren't you upset when Don Amilcar said to our faces that we were touching ourselves in honor of Luciana?"

Esteban looked at him calmly, without altering his posture or his voice. He responded firmly, but without aggression:
"No. Why would I be upset?"

He paused briefly and added,
"Don Amilcar said what everyone thinks and few dare to admit. You don't know her like I do. You haven't been ridden by her like I have. You haven't felt her weight, her strength, or her power over you. You've only desired her... from afar."

He looked at each of them with a mixture of compassion and certainty.
"I don't need to hide what I feel for her. Nor lie to myself. She chose me. And while you hide in murmurs and shame, I carry her with pride."

Then, without further ado, he poured himself some water and drank calmly. No one knew what to say.

Another murmured: "Don Amilcar called us wankers."

One of those present let out a nervous laugh, but the atmosphere remained tense. No one contradicted him.

Esteban heard him and, without raising his voice, commented:
"Don Amilcar used a crude word, yes... but he didn't lie."

Then he looked him straight in the eyes and added calmly:
"Don't be offended by the term. Be offended by the truth behind it. You fantasize about Luciana. She passes by and you tremble, you hide, you sigh, you kneel... but no one dares to approach you like a man."

Another tried to defend himself:
"She's just imposing!"

"Of course she is," Esteban agreed. "Because she's great. Because she knows what she wants. Because she looks at you, and without saying a word, you break. She's not for the one who desires her, but for the one who can sustain her."

And everyone fell silent again.

"Watching her riding is... wonderful," one of them sighed, his eyes lost in some indelible memory.

"It's art," another said. "It's as if the world stopped to admire her."

"She doesn't ride like anyone else," a third added. "She dominates, directs, possesses. And whoever is ridden by her... is only the road."

"And so, she blesses that road with every step," another commented quietly, almost with religious devotion.

Esteban remained silent, listening, knowing that everything they said was true. When Luciana rode, she wasn't just a rider: she was a Queen, a symbol, pure force in motion. And everyone knew it.

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Drunkenness (4)

"Luciana bridles and saddles her horses," said another, his voice cracking with suppressed emotion. "How I wish she would do that to me! To bite the bit... to feel her place and adjust the bridle on my head, how she secures the saddle to my body..."

"And then for her to take the reins," added another, his gaze blazing, "to dominate me, to guide me. There is no greater glory than being ridden by her."

"Let her ride me and lead me wherever she wants!" sighed another. "To be her horse... that is the greatest honor a man could dream of."

"Esteban," one said, turning to him, "you've already experienced it. What does it feel like?"

Esteban lowered his gaze for a moment, then calmly raised his gaze and replied:
"It feels... as if she were the sky... and you, the ground that has the good fortune to support it."

Suddenly, spontaneously, everyone present whinnied.

It was a long, guttural, almost wild sound that burst forth without warning from the depths of their throats. They didn't look at each other, they didn't agree. It just happened. As if repressed desire, pent-up devotion, and shared fantasy had finally found a single form of expression: a collective whinny that shook the stillness of the night.

Esteban blinked, surprised, and then smiled with a mixture of pride and bewilderment. Deep down, he had felt it too. That invisible force she awakened... that instinctive call.

"She's already tamed us," one said softly, stroking his neck as if he could still feel the touch of a bridle.

"And she's not even here," another added with a reverent sigh.

"She doesn't need to be," Esteban murmured, almost like a prayer. She lives in our heads... and rides our dreams.

They neighed again, this time louder, longer, like a runaway echo of what they felt inside. Their faces flushed, their chests heaving. And among them, Esteban neighed too.

He was no longer just a witness. He was part of it.

Gazing up at the starry sky, young Esteban let out the neigh with conviction. His throat vibrated with the same emotion as the others. Not out of weakness, but out of recognition. Because he knew, like them, that Luciana didn't just dominate them. She transformed them.

"Hiiiiiiee!" several of them exclaimed, between laughter and suppressed tears, between pride and devotion.

In that instant, they were equal. Human horses. Devoted. Willing.

And even though she wasn't present, they all felt her on top of them. As if her boots were echoing on their backs, as if her weight were holding them in place.

"She did this to us," one whispered with a smile.

"And I wouldn't change a thing," Esteban said, still breathing heavily.
None of them would.

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The Drunkenness (5)

Suddenly, the door opened with a loud bang. Everyone fell silent.

The silhouette that appeared silhouetted by the light in the hallway took everyone's breath away. It was a large man, his torso bare but partially covered by an elaborate dark leather horse costume. He wore a bridle and bit, a saddle perfectly fitted to his back, and reins that hung behind him, where Luciana, upright and dominant, held them with absolute elegance.

She was dressed in an impeccable black riding habit: a tight-fitting jacket, riding pants that emphasized her curves, and long, gleaming riding boots with silver spurs that clinked with each step of the human horse. In her right hand, she held a short riding crop, which she turned slowly between her fingers with studied disdain.

Luciana advanced her horse a few steps, silently observing the circle of men. No one dared to move. Their gazes fell first on Luciana's boots, then on her figure, and finally on her serene, haughty, absolutely in-control face.

With a half-smile, she broke the silence:
"I heard some neighing."

Her words weren't a question. They were a statement. A warning.

Some looked down. Others, like Esteban, couldn't help but smile nervously. No one responded.

Luciana tugged lightly on the reins. The man leading her—strong, sweaty, and devoted—knelt slowly with her riding next to him, bowing briskly.

She dismounted gracefully, and the sound of her spurs on the wooden floor broke the silence like a judgment.

"Are my horses restless?" she said as she walked among them, her heels clicking. "Or are they simply eager to be ridden?"

The stifled neigh of one of them escaped without permission. Luciana smiled.

She looked at them. She didn't say a word at first. She just watched them, with that mixture of calm and authority that made it impossible for them to meet her gaze. And as if her mere presence issued a silent command, all the men fell to their knees, one after another, in a wave of inevitable submission. Then, with automatic reverence, they placed their hands on the ground, bowing their heads to her.

Luciana stopped in her tracks. The riding crop now rested on her shoulder, and the reins of the man who had brought it hung at her side, an obvious symbol of her dominance. She smiled.
"That's how I like it," she said, her tone soft, almost affectionate, but charged with power. "I want you to organize yourselves and present yourselves to me, one by one..."

Her gaze swept the line of kneeling bodies.
"...to greet me as I deserve: by kissing my boots."

The silence was broken only by the scraping of knees moving on the ground, as the men lined up with reverent awkwardness, arranging themselves without a single protest. Esteban was the first. He looked up briefly, swallowed, and crawled over to her, bending over the shiny black spurred boot.

Luciana extended a leg slightly toward him, like a queen extending her hand.
"Here," she commanded softly.

And he kissed the leather of Luciana's boot, his eyes closed.

Luciana closed hers too, like someone receiving a just tribute. Then she looked at the next man.
"You," she indicated with the whip.

The ceremony had begun.

So, one by one, the men approached on their knees, heads bowed and obedient, until they stood before Luciana. She rode her "human horse," firm and majestic in her black riding habit.

She didn't move; she didn't need to. Her serene, commanding gaze, her upright posture, the way she held the reins in one hand and the whip in the other were enough to let each of them know exactly what to do.

One by one, they prostrated themselves before her, took the toe of her boot, kissed it with a mixture of fear, respect, and devotion, and then slowly stepped back, leaving the place for the next.

Luciana said nothing more. She just watched. Her silence was stronger than any words. Her smile, faint but constant, told them she approved of every gesture. Her power lay not in what she said, but in what she represented.

When the last one kissed her boots and silently stepped back, Luciana straightened her posture even more and, in a soft but clear voice, said,
"That's how I like it. That's fine."

And with a slight movement of her heels she spurred her horse, giving him the signal to advance, leaving the hall with the same elegance with which she had entered, leaving behind everyone kneeling, breathing deeply, because they had experienced a sacred rite.

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The Drunkenness (6)

Esteban said, "Luciana is waiting for us outside. Let's pay the bill and follow her."

Everyone nodded silently, still shaken by the scene they had just witnessed. Esteban stood up first, took out his wallet with trembling but determined hands, and went to the register. While he paid the bill, the others began to get up, one by one, with a mixture of nervousness and excitement.

Outside, Luciana waited, riding her "human horse," the shine of her black boots standing out in the streetlights. The whip rested gently on her thigh, and the reins hung from her firm hands, as if she controlled not only her mount, but everything around her.

Esteban returned quickly, and seeing the image of her out there, so serene, so dominant, he murmured, "Let's not make her wait any longer."

And so, they all followed her, without saying a word, knowing That the night didn't end there. Luciana led them now, as she always had: with elegance, power... and absolute authority.

Luciana advanced with majestic bearing, sitting firmly on the saddle that rested on the back of her human mount. Every movement of her horse was firm, obedient, following the precise instructions of the reins and the pressure of her spurs. Her black riding habit clung to her figure, commanding respect and admiration.

Behind her, in line, the men moved on all fours. Their hands and knees touched the ground with discipline, while their gaze remained fixed on the boots that followed. Some panted, but none stopped. The rhythm of their movements formed a strange and devout procession, as if they were following a deity incarnated as an Amazon.

Luciana didn't look back. She knew they would come. She felt it in the vibration of the ground, in the obedient rhythm of their steps, in the whinnying. Low voices that escaped from their throats from time to time.

The scene was silent, imposing, almost sacred. The only sounds were the tapping of boots against the sides of their mount, the creaking of the bridle's leather, and the faint echo of men's hands and knees hitting the pavement as they walked.

Someone spoke with concern, almost like an echo of the collective consciousness that still held sway. "Jorge, you must go home, you must be with your wife and children."

Jorge stopped for a moment. His breathing was labored, his forehead sweaty from the effort of riding on all fours for so long. But his gaze was fixed on Luciana, on the majestic figure that rose on her mount, on that living symbol of dominance and desire.

In a firm voice, without hesitation, Jorge replied:
"Opportunities don't come twice in a row... and this may be my only chance. I'm not going to waste it."

There was nothing more to say. Jorge placed both hands on the He dropped to the ground again, squared his knees, and continued advancing behind Luciana, his gaze determined, as if his fate depended on keeping up with her.

Luciana, without turning around, smiled. She had heard the conversation. And the slight crack of her riding crop in the air sealed the moment.

Another, trying to establish order or perhaps remind himself of some limit, raised his voice:
"Married people, abstain!"

For a moment, it seemed the group would stop... but they didn't. The responses came out like lightning, quick and fiery:
"Are you crazy?!"
"You abstain, coward!"
"For Luciana, it doesn't matter if my wife hits me."
"Let her leave me, but let her leave me after kissing Luciana's boots."
"If I get a divorce, let it be with honor."
"I'd rather sleep on the street than miss this!"

Laughter and exclamations continued. Some whinnied, others beat the ground with their hands. like hooves. Jorge, without missing a beat, shouted from the front:
"Marriage is sacred... but she is more so!"

Luciana turned her head slightly, her gaze shining with the spectacle. In a soft, barely audible but powerful voice, she said:
"Those who have a mistress... are about to meet their true Mistress."

Thus, they crossed the village in an unusual and powerful scene: Luciana upright on her human mount, advancing with a firm step and serene rhythm, while the other men followed her on all fours, like a devoted and indomitable procession. Despite the rough ground, the dust, the stones that hurt their palms and knees, none stopped. The pain didn't matter. The wounds were insignificant compared to the privilege of following her.

Finally, Luciana reached her stable. Without hurrying, she dismounted her horse and walked to the large wooden door. She opened it with a solemn gesture, turned on her heels, and looked at them. They, with sweaty faces and their limbs marked by the effort, they could barely breathe… but, even so, they smiled.

One by one, they entered, dragging their aching bodies as if undergoing a purification ritual. The creaking of the wood beneath their hands, the scraping of their knees against the floor... it all seemed part of an ancient ceremony.

Luciana watched them from inside, her arms crossed and a smile on her lips.
"Come in, my horses," she said tenderly, but also with authority. "You have demonstrated your devotion today. I am proud."

And they, their eyes aglow, nodded. They had arrived at the home they deserved.

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#73 2025-07-29 09:44:11

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Re: The bride

The Stable (1)

As Esteban, on his knees, bowed his head and devotedly kissed Luciana's high boots, the other men looked at him with a mixture of admiration and a desire to imitate him. Their lips respectfully touched the dusty leather she had worn the entire journey, as if each kiss sealed her loyalty.

Luciana looked at him gently, then looked up at the others, who waited silently, panting slightly from the exertion. Her voice was clear and firm:
"To belong to my herd, and to be part of my stable," she said, "it's not enough to follow me. It's not enough to drag yourself through the streets or neigh like good stallions."

She took a step forward, the heel of her boot ringing against the wooden floor, and then continued:
"True horses earn their place. They have to prove they are worthy. That their dedication is not just a passing impulse, but total devotion."

The men gulped. Some lowered their gaze. Others held it, challenging themselves.

"Here," she said, walking slowly among them, "there is no room for the undecided, nor for those who still doubt who they belong to. The stable is a sanctuary, but also a test. Whoever enters, submits. Whoever neighs, does so from the soul. Whoever carries, does so with pride."

Esteban remained at her feet, still, as if the world had stopped for him.

Luciana stopped in the center of the stable and finally said:
"Tonight, I will give you the opportunity to prove to me if you are worthy of being mine."

Luciana crossed her arms, her imposing silhouette silhouetted by the dim light of the stable.

The men, still on their knees, sweaty, their palms and knees scraped, breathed heavily as they watched her with a mixture of devotion and fear.

With a raised eyebrow and a half-smile laced with irony, Luciana asked in a firm, mocking tone:
"Are you sober yet... or are you still dizzy?"

There was a brief silence. Some looked down, embarrassed; others tried to smile, albeit nervously. One, with a trembling voice, dared to answer:
"Dizzy... but because of you."

There were a few brief laughs, the kind that arise in the midst of tension, and another added:
"If this is a dream, I don't want to wake up."

Luciana smiled faintly, that smile that could melt or dominate, as she pleased. Then she walked slowly among them, observing them one by one, like someone evaluating new foals.
"Good," she said finally. "Don't let your dizziness pass yet. Because what's coming... is just beginning."

Luciana walked slowly in front of them, her boots echoing authoritatively on the dirt floor of the stable. She stopped in the center, looked at them one by one with a mixture of tenderness and dominance, and in a firm but seductive voice, she said:
"In this town there are two kinds of horses: equines... and humans. I have two equines"—she paused briefly—"and seven humans."

She leaned forward slightly, staring at them while smiling mischievously.
"And you? How many of you are here?"

There was a moment of silence. One of them, still panting, answered, counting with difficulty:
"Eight... eight, madam."

"Eight?" she repeated, amused. "Then with you, that makes fifteen. A good harvest tonight."

And while they remained silent, she added, "Now let's see if all of you deserve the mount... or if you'd rather walk upright again as if you've never tasted what it means to belong to me."

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#74 2025-07-29 10:22:31

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The Stable (2)

Luciana, without bending down or getting her hands dirty, slightly raised the toe of her right boot—an elegant brown leather boot with a high heel—and with a smooth, slow movement, stroked the sole of her boot over the head of one of the men who was on all fours at her feet, as if petting a faithful dog.

The gesture was as delicate as it was humiliating. She did it with the sole of her boot, with the same ease with which one moves a branch from the path or calms a tame beast. He closed his eyes and remained motionless, accepting the caress with devotion, while the others watched with a fervor mixed with envy and adoration.

Feeling the caress of the sole on his head and face, the lucky man's heart raced; he closed his eyes, shuddering. The rough, worn texture didn't repel him, but rather attracted him even more. He didn't need words from Luciana giving him commands. He bowed his head even lower, slowly and devoutly, guided by a mixture of respect and fervor, and slowly kissed the sole that caressed him, with trembling lips. Then, in a deeper gesture of surrender, he licked the sole with his tongue with devotion and reverence, heedless of the dust or wear, for this gesture sealed his acceptance and gratitude.

Luciana watched him silently from above, serene and powerful, and without saying a word, because nothing needed to be said, she knew he was already hers. Luciana said nothing at that moment. Luciana's smile said it all: this was the place, and she was choosing who to allow to stay there. Submission wasn't asked for: it was offered, and he offered it completely.

He was on all fours, palms and knees flat on the floor, his back straight, and his head tilted to one side, just within reach of Luciana's boot. His posture wasn't one of rest, but of total surrender: his arms firm, his legs trembling with exertion, but held with dignity by the desire to please her.

He was like a horse waiting for its rider's command, his body ready and his soul surrendered. The caress with the boot wasn't just a gesture of affection: it was a silent approval, a promise of belonging... and for him, a blessing.

He settled himself on the floor, lowering his head until his forehead rested against the cold, dusty floor, completely surrendering. This position made it easy for Luciana to barely bend her foot to caress it with the sole of her boot. He didn't want her to make any effort; her duty was to make everything easier for her, even to receive the caresses in the most humble position possible.

Luciana, without pausing her firm stride, gently slid the sole of her foot over the defeated man's cheek, the back of his neck, even his lips. He sighed, as if each touch blessed him. For him, those caresses weren't just contact: they were acceptance, belonging, being part of her stable.

He lay on the ground, full length, extending his arms and legs with the submission of someone who knows exactly where he belongs. His body formed a human carpet at Luciana's feet, and his forehead remained pressed to the ground, waiting, almost trembling with emotion. Luciana looked at him with a mixture of satisfaction and dominance, then walked over him with the confidence of someone treading on her property. Each step of her boots resonated against his back like a drum of belonging.

He didn't move an inch. He just closed his eyes and received each footfall like a sacred caress.

Esteban lay on the ground. Luciana asked him, "Are you jealous?"

Esteban, lying on the ground, his face pressed to the earth and his body extended in absolute surrender, could barely move his lips to respond. Luciana, standing over the man lying next to Esteban, her boots firmly marking his territory, tilted her head slightly, her tone playful but firm, and asked again:
"Are you jealous?"

He swallowed, not yet daring to look up, and in a quiet but emotional voice, replied:
"I just want to be yours... I don't want anyone else to carry your weight like I do..."

Luciana smiled, pleased by his response. With the toe of her boot, she gently stroked his cheek, and he turned his face to kiss the sole, loving even the slightest touch.

Luciana marks her territory with an imposing mix of presence, dominant body language, and symbolic gestures that make it clear who's in control. Some ways she does this include:

1. Her posture and gaze: She stands confidently, feet apart, hands on her hips or crossed, and with a direct gaze that few can match. Her eyes slowly scan the surroundings, as if inspecting everything, and when she rests her gaze on someone, that person feels like they are being measured… and subdued.

3. Selective physical contact: She strokes or touches her followers with her foot or boot, as if claiming them. If someone is on the ground, she doesn't need to bend down: she touches them with the sole or side of her boot, and they understand that this is a sign of acceptance... or dominance.

4. Direct verbal language: She speaks clearly, without beating around the bush. Her short, sometimes sarcastic phrases always carry symbolic weight. When she says, "This is my space," she isn't negotiating it. And when she asks, "Who's in charge here?", the answer is already known.

5. Submission rituals: To those who follow her, she gives small symbolic "rituals" to consolidate their place: kissing her boots, accompanying her on all fours, following her silently, or waiting in line to greet her. Whoever does so submits; whoever resists is excluded from her circle.
Luciana doesn't shout. She doesn't need to impose herself by force. Her dominance is natural, enveloping. Like that of a Queen who knows that every step she takes is watched... and venerated.

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#75 2025-07-29 11:01:48

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The Stable (3)

Luciana, walking atop her new acquisition, with a half-smile on her lips and a serene, yet penetrating, gaze. He remained on the ground, processing the implications of his position before her.

She raised her chin slightly, and with a soft but firm voice—one that is not discussed, that is obeyed—she asked:
"What is your name... and how old are you?"

She didn't need to repeat it. She didn't raise her voice. She didn't grow impatient. She simply looked at him, with that calmness that commands more than any shout. He felt he should answer clearly, without omitting or stuttering, as if he were in the presence of someone who could read his soul. Because Luciana had already chosen him... and now she wanted to know who she had tamed.

He raised his head slightly, not daring to meet her gaze, and with a trembling but determined tone, he answered:
"My name is Andrés... I am thirty-four years old."

Luciana nodded slowly, still watching him, as if every word he spoke confirmed what she already sensed. Then, without another word, she gently placed the toe of her boot on Andrés's shoulder, as if sealing an acceptance. Andrés closed his eyes and exhaled deeply: not out of fear, but out of surrender.

She said, "Andrés, you have the same name as my pet. Are you married? Do you have children? Tell the truth because it always comes out."

Andrés swallowed and answered in a low but clear voice, still not daring to raise his eyes from the ground:
"Yes... I'm married. I have two children."

Luciana bent down slightly, resting an elbow on his knee, and with a half-smile said,
"Then you are either brave... or very foolish."

She paused and added gently, but firmly,
"There is no room for lies here, Andrés. If you want to be part of my pack, you will be with all that you are... or you will not be at all."
Then he stood up, and without taking his foot off her, he concluded:
"Do you understand?"

Luciana asked: "The age and sex of your wife and two children?"

Andrés, still prostrate, answered in an obedient voice:
"My wife's name is Julia, she's 33 years old..."

"And the children?" Luciana interrupted with inquisitive calm.

"A 12-year-old boy... and a 9-year-old girl."

Luciana nodded slowly, without losing her calm but dominant tone.
"What you do here, you do for yourself, not for them. You know that, right?"

Andrés didn't respond with words. He just nodded, still with his forehead pressed to the ground.

Luciana said: "As long as they are minors, your children are outside this group; regarding your wife, you must speak to her and get her consent. If you don't get it, you're out."

Andrés swallowed, still without looking up. "Yes, Mistress Luciana... I'll try."

Luciana walked slowly over him, each step echoing with the firmness of her boots.
"I'm not interested in you lying or hiding things from me," she added in a soft but firm voice. "Everything is known here. If you cheat on your wife, you cheat on yourself... and me."

She stopped above him. "You have until Sunday to speak to her. If you don't, don't come back to this stable. Understood?"
"Understood, Luciana," Andrés whispered, his forehead still on the ground.

Luciana said, "For now, you'll have to explain to Julia about the heel and sole prints."

Andrés nodded with a slight shudder, still not daring to look up.

Luciana leaned slightly, allowing the shadow of her figure to cover him completely, and added with a smile that left no room for doubt:
"Tell her they weren't footprints... they were marks of choice. And that, if she allows it, I can also leave my footprints, as a sign of respect and welcome. Or, if she prefers, I can invite her to mark her territory on you, as I did, because that's her right... and you belong to her."

She stood gracefully, turned, and walked toward the stable exit, leaving behind the echoing clack of her heels as a reminder that not everything she steps on... is erased.

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#76 2025-08-05 12:05:12

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The Encounter (1)

Julia wanted to get to know Luciana better in her home, on her own turf, to observe her closely, get to know her thoroughly, and thus make a decision about the next steps. She wanted to see with her own eyes this lady about whom so much was being talked about. She invited Luciana to her home, her own turf, as if challenging, but also receiving with genuine curiosity. She was a cautious, observant woman, and needed to feel, more than hear, to make a decision. Andrés, her husband, agreed; they both knew this meeting would not be just another one.

Luciana, confident in herself, accepted the challenge—that is, the invitation—without hesitation, and went to the meeting at the house where Julia and Andrés were waiting for her. The meeting promised to be epic. Her firm gait and confident gaze made it clear that she was not afraid of entering foreign territory. Upon arrival, she was greeted courteously, but also with a hint of tense expectation. Everything indicated that this meeting would have a solemn, perhaps even challenging, air.

Luciana introduced herself with the serenity of someone not seeking to impress, but rather to be recognized for who she is. Her firm gait along the driveway, her tight riding attire, and her riding boots made it clear that she wasn't here to waste time. When she arrived, Julia and Andrés were already waiting for her on the porch of the house, both with a mixture of expectation and restraint.

"Welcome to my home," Julia said, taking a step forward. "I wanted to meet you on my own ground, without masks, without third parties."

"I like solid ground," Luciana replied without hesitation, meeting her gaze with a half-smile.

Inside, the walls seemed to hold family secrets, but that day they would witness a different kind of encounter. What Julia had planned as a kind of subtle confrontation quickly transformed thanks to an unexpected element: the spontaneous appearance of Matías and Camila.

However, what began as a strategic visit or a tense evaluation took an unexpectedly harmonious turn thanks to the spontaneous participation of Julia and Andrés's children: Camila and, above all, Matías.

The way Matías immersed himself in the equestrian atmosphere, offering himself as Luciana's horse, softened the atmosphere, transforming the occasion into a pleasant, cordial, and revealing experience.

In response, Matías overcame his fear of Luciana and, in an impulse that surprised everyone, he knelt without being asked, lowered his head, and crawled on his knees and hands before Luciana. She watched him closely, understanding that it was no simple game.

"Can I be your horse, Luciana?" Matías asked, his voice soft but firm.

Luciana bridled, saddled, rode, and led him without responding. Her decision was clear and powerful. Naturally, she led Matías through the room in an atmosphere that, without warning, became completely equestrian. She made several complete turns, elegantly, marking each step with a ceremonial rhythm. Then she led him to Camila and, without dismounting yet, looked at Julia.

Julia remained standing, watching silently, without interrupting. Her face was a mixture of astonishment, curiosity, and something harder to name.

Luciana gracefully dismounted and sat in an armchair, still commanding center stage. She gently took the reins and handed them to Camila.
"Take care of my horse," she said in a firm, sweet voice, like someone giving away a part of themselves.

Julia and Andrés then approached. They sat near Luciana. Julia spoke bluntly:
"I didn't imagine we'd have chemistry."

Luciana smiled, without taking her gaze off Matías.
"My horse... I mean, Matías, broke the ice."

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#77 2025-08-05 12:07:01

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The Encounter (2)

The shared laughter eased any remaining tension. Julia took advantage of the moment to invite Luciana:
"While Camila and Matías play, let's go to my bedroom. I want you to see Andrés's back."

Luciana nodded. As they entered the room, Andrés lay down on the floor. Julia pointed at him:
"You left these sole and heel prints, right?"

Luciana nodded.

"And I left these others," Julia added. "Look."

They counted each other's sole and heel prints. Andrés waited silently, aware of being beneath two powerful women who recognized each other. Julia and Luciana shared glances, discovering in that simple gesture a complicity they hadn't expected.

Then Julia turned to Luciana and, in a calm but determined voice, pronounced with a conviction that surprised even herself:
"Andrés has my permission to participate in your stable." And I want to go too.

Luciana said nothing at first. She just looked at her, then lowered her gaze to Andrés's back, which united them like a common mat. Her smile was subtle.
"Good," she replied, knowing it was just the beginning.

The deal was sealed. When they returned to the living room, Julia called her children and informed them of the decision: the parents would join Luciana's stable, Julia as a new rider, ready to ride, and Andrés as a willing steed, ready to be ridden.

Luciana, who had arrived as a visitor, now left as a recognized leader. Julia's home was no longer neutral territory: it was a new space conquered by the young rider's charisma. Julia would be taken. Andrés, taken. And Luciana's stable only grew because the house was not just Julia's land: it had become a new extension of the stable. And Luciana, as always, remained at the helm.

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